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10 lines due by midnight (4 hrs.)

Voters must quote best lines in the verses

check.. you going first?

check...dont matter who drops first fam just drop ya verse by midnight like in the rules.

your yung and full of estrogen if you're working with dosia
battlin me high; i'll devour you faster than the greeks did ambrosia

fuck ya picture with a gangsta reppin a toaster
walk your ass back to the closet and finally attain some closure.

while writtin this diss you're probably puffin on some trees
bitch please; be careful you and your boys are turning from hes to shes

takin on me i'll leave your face distorted like your perception
quiver at my reflection, an L tonight is how you were destined

your less than .500 record brings forth no intimidation
leave here seein more colors than the first high school integration

Gridlock has potential.

fuck ya picture with a gangsta reppin a toaster
walk your ass back to the closet and finally attain some closure.
^Best bar from Grid.

while writtin this diss you're probably puffin on some trees
bitch please; be careful you and your boys are turning from hes to shes
^Worst bar, avoid lines like this in battles they're far too simple.

I knew you were whack as fuck, if people said ur dope its a fib
Cuz when u accepted i thought u might be tight, then i read the quote n ya sig
^Fav bar from Dosia.

Dosia didn't really have a worst bar but everything apart from what I quoted was kinda basic and rushed like he said.

Vote - Dosia by a catsweep.

best lines:
And when i show grid, iron.....it wont be on the football field - dosia

your less than .500 record brings forth no intimidation
leave here seein more colors than the first high school integration - gridlock

vote - dosia, he had a good amount of filler but got a clean category sweep in this

bump.

vote-dosia

although he had some filler who gives a shit, everyone has filler in their bars. he just keyed his shit up, had some clever lines in there. the key punch was pretty good. had maybe a personal or two in there. the grid punch was pretty cool too. you could have came harder but the punches were still there.


grid came pretty simple and basic with most of his bars. the only one i really felt came pretty nice was that "closure" line.

3-0...

Records updated and thread closed. Dosia wins by KO.