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Revealing the Truth

Posted: Thu Oct 28, 2010 1:11 am
by pablo1212
-Real words dont come from those drinking or even piffing/
-Dealing with crystal myth and , thinking of maybe sniffing/
-Fealing sinful and twisted , wicked would be descriptive/
-Stealing all skillful lyrics and switching place with the gifted/
-The spirit of those who spitting , a fistful of them who misfit/
-Their hopes are clean and lifted but toughts are shifted to rigid/
-Flipping their inner image to seeming like they were vivid/
-But skipping their true persona by rinsing the way they live in/
-Talent was never given , so humans turn into villains/
-Drivin by thoughts of fillin the "kittens" of younger woman/
-Using various tactics , to fit in within the different/
-Category of people like children and even infants/
-They try to stick in your head , a message thats always hidden/
-Building and sewing threads , of thoughts that are so forbidden/
-Forgetting about forgiven and hatred's a major proof/
-Im strippen all of the lies to reveal the naked truth/

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Re: Revealing the Truth

Posted: Thu Oct 28, 2010 4:23 am
by Momeijah
Man I don't know if it was the message u were going for but I thought it was successful at explaining people's hidden agendas. The whole second half just spoke to me in that sense. I think I've read some shit from u before cause I recognize the hyphens at the start of ur lines but this one really stood out to me and kept my attention. The whole second half was my favourite part keep at it man.

Re: Revealing the Truth

Posted: Thu Oct 28, 2010 12:09 pm
by pablo1212
Thanks for the feedback , and I just wanted to mention how negative people have a negative influence on society , and they spread it through music ...