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Topical battle. 8 bars. Topic has not been selected as of yet. House rules, and the Collectively Ill crew can vote in this thread as well. Due 72 hours after both emcees check in.

Consider this my check...

-- Mon Nov 01, 2010 1:16 pm --

This was posted in the call out thread by Rugged. I think since its the first suggestion, we should use it. A great writer can write about anything, so why be picky about the topic.

The importance of needing a condom like a best friend, but never having one when you need it most.

Check


Just To Be Clear I Can Go Anyway I Want On That Topic Yeah?

Yes you can

-- Fri Nov 05, 2010 8:23 pm --

Hey I know Im late in this. Ive got my verse finished but Im on a friends comp and not able to get to it at the moment. It will be posted within 24 hours.

Hey No Problem Man I Got No Internet So Probs Gonna Have To Drop This Tuesday If Thats Cool With You?

Shit, dude, I wish shit was simple but its more complex than just friends that like to hang with you
Cuz muthafuckers need to carry more rubber in this day and age than a Nascar pit crew...
They protect and serve better than the law, and best friends? Man, this could be better than them all
There's so many bitches runnin around here like LeBron James its crazy, just veterans with balls...
Think if your dad hadnt put a load in your mother, you might not consider your closest bro as your brother
But hell, best friends are like latex instead of safe sex, cuz if you use one, then you can go to another... (haha)
I look to my peeps in times of need, sometimes we light the weed to get as high as fiends
But none are ever there when you have to harvest after the darkness alone couldnt fight the seeds...
When I spit there's no remorse, cuz Im using a condom dumbass, not because this flame of lyrics will blow the doors
Off your beloved Porsche, even Brad Pitt in Troy would need more protection against this aggression than a Trojan Horse...
My crew? No question, there's none compared to mine, some even try and dare to rhyme
But they fallin off like over-sized rubbers on rims, and it never seems like a flat is there in time...
Even if lackin in funds, I got some friends that are stacking em some but only passing out ones
Yet this the only clip that takes your shit and keeps you from going to jail by putting bullets back in the gun...
Once you cock it, I'll let loose with the rocket, shit's cumming out polished, confused? try to stop it
Cause Im bringin my boys with me, so I dont have some boys by freaks, that's why the troops' in the pocket...


First topical battle. Just getting in the swing of things. Get it? Swing of things? Ahahaha.

I Known Im Late With This...Il Have My Verse Up Tomorrow Dude

-- Thu Nov 11, 2010 3:08 am --

We All Up In This Club The Music Pumping,See The Girls And I Start Running
Get A Little Dance On Start Grinding,That Turns Into Virtually Dry Humping
Shes Kissing Me Now Grabbing My Arm Dragging Me Off Into The Toilet
So I Check My Wallet Start To Panic Wheres My Durex,Shit I Forgot It
Ask Her If She Got Any? Tells Me Not To Worry Says I Dont Need No Protection
But Its Safe Sex Or No Sex,Im Not Going In There Without Any Contraception
Cos Iv Heard All The Horror Stories,I Dont Want No Warts On My Testicles
So I Guess Now She Aint Seeing Me Cumming Unless Her Vagina's Got Spectacles
She's Telling Me She's So Horny She Needs To Feel Me In Her Tight Pussy
So I Tell Her Il Go Ask My Friend,"Dont Go Away Babe Il Be Back In A Hurry"
Wade Through The Dancefloor Like The Thing Was The Fucking Sea
Cant Find My Boy Anywhere,Not Even Outside Where The Fuck Is He
My Ball's Are Like Ribena Berrie's On Steroids I Need To Shoot My Load
But I Aint Going In Bareback With A Girl That I Dont Even Fucking Know
Cos I Aint Having No Sex,Then Getting That Text,You Know The "Im Late" Text
So Next Time Im Out Im Going Prepared,Time To Stock Up On Some Durex

Murk...

Cuz muthafuckers need to carry more rubber in this day and age than a Nascar pit crew...
^^Proper
They protect and serve better than the law, and best friends? Man, this could be better than them all
But hell, best friends are like latex instead of safe sex, cuz if you use one, then you can go to another... (haha)
I see what you tried, but no- you slipped.
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Orf..


Ask Her If She Got Any? Tells Me Not To Worry Says I Dont Need No Protection
Punch a G in head head back for suggesting that.

And only rookies forget the jimmy!...
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Overall .. My votes on Murk He just had more to offer, strait forward actually- Orf's had no substance.. I can go on, but its clear as day.

Thanks For The Vote....

Orf, Im not going to delete your post, but Im going to let you know that in battles against other people, some might consider that swaying votes. But I know you arent meaning too, and I just want to look at for you fam

Shit Sorry Man Didnt Think Before I Posted

i read both of these, it was hard to vote since both verses had a completely different story line.. i liked Orf's story and i also liked Murks rubber wordplay... i thought orf started out hot but then sorta fell off at the end.. murk stayed with consistency however some bars were boring and didnt hit hard... but over all, im gonna have to vote for Murk, for better punches, stayed on topic, more rubber references...

vote: Murk

aiight 2-0 murk

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I liked both verses, but Orf's made me wanna go to the club and dry hump some hoes. Murk's verse was really good, tad bit stretched, but I heard Murk likes stretch marks. Overall I got to give the vote Orfodontist, his was as raw as Almayvonne's skid marks. It just had a sick feel to it, like that real life voice.

Vote - Orfadox

Murk 2 votes, Orfadox 1 vote. Thanks for voting TheMan (lol). Its appreciated though.

Uppin for votes.

VOTE: Murk

Reason-- In one word- Creativity. Murk's verse had a lot more wordplay and a real thought out kinda way of expressing. It was the kinda verse I read slow, read into the meaning a bit, and had a few 'oh shit, that's cool' moments. Orf's verse wasn't bad, had solid imagery, it was real easy to picture what's going on in the story, but the story's just kinda boring, not really any kind of creativity brought to the plot. On the flow front, I also felt the music of Murk's verse better. They both had rhythm and rhyme, but Murk's felt more natural and had a more complex rhyme scheme.