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chopped n screwd added it as an attatchement

Sounds alright brah. Im not sure if its my dinky computer speakers at work, but your vocals seem too loud fo the beat. Also a tactic ive been playing with, is taking a break within the verse, so when i start to run out of breath i can no sound forced, or step on the flow while i try to breathe. Just an opinion on some step on flows i heard. other than that nice drop.

LOL Thats Not Chopped And Screwed Fam!!! Comin From A Real Texan Nawww Dats Just Ya Vocals In A Lower Octave. Real CnS Would Mean The WHOLE Track Would Be Screwed And Then It Would Have Chops, Which Usually Fall ON Claps Or The Rhymes Themselves. The Beat Is Fast And Sounds Weird Having A Normal Hook Mixed With Lower Vocals. Overall Tho, Track Sounds Strait. Sometimes Ya Flow Sounds As If You're Outta Breath. You Can Do Punch Ins To Fix That. Basically, When You Feel Like You're Runnin Out Of Breath, Stop. Keep That Take, Then Drop The Que In About 3-4 Bars Behind Where You Stopped, Start Up Recording And Spittin With Yourself (This Matches Your Vocal Level And Energy) And Then Keep Recording. That Should Help Out Alot, And If U Do It Correctly, It Won't Even Sound As If You Punched In.

yeah this isn't really considered Chopped N Skrewed... the beat would be slowed down... the verses would have been repeated a lot... the vocals were mixed okay... u almost fell off a few times... what i'd suggest if you start runnin out of breaths... get to a point in ur verse where u can stop it... and then just over lap urself on another track... so it doesn't sound all mashed up where ur tryin to keep up on one track... that will help a lot with flow and stayin on beat... otherwise it was okay... not really my kind of music but it was okay man... i'd give it a 7/10