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I envision- new conditions- if decisions
aren't renditions- of traditions- mental prisons.-
If you listen- to the wisdom- of a brighter vision
you will be among them who have risen
to initiate a mission- to unite them nations-
that are fightin'- chokin' human rights tight as a python/

As the swords flash and the shafts fly like a clash of the titans,
you will either hide from the cries and be frightened
or arise like a phoenix as it flies from the sun...
It is time to strike like thunder
and tear asunder- the veils that divide...
Have you ever wondered
if there is a greater oneness
that we all can recognize?
If you ponder- on the world- with your inner eye
your mind will wander to the pearls that reside...
If you dive into life with a purpose in your steps
then you'll find how to dwell in the deeper depths,
then your latent powers manifest destiny's treasure chest...
Let this thought sit for a bit, never drop it.
It can teach what it is to be free
from the prison that we keep- in our midst.

I envision- new conditions- if decisions
aren't renditions- of traditions- mental prisons.-
If you listen- to the wisdom- of a brighter vision
you will be among them who have risen
to initiate a mission- to unite them nations-
that are fightin'- chokin' human rights tight as a python/

As the swords flash and the shafts fly press onward.

On The Hook U Could Def Make All The Lines Sound Dope.... Just Get Tripped On The Last One... Thats Me Tho .I Like The Flow For The Most Part.. Good Imagery ..On One Bar i Feel That U Rhymed Well But Fell A Lil Short Of The Message.. Other Than That This Is A Nice Piece... Good Creativity

If you ponder- on the world- with your inner eye
your mind will wander to the pearls that reside...

Nice piece and content definitely works for things as they are now ... !!!

So, just to continue the theme .....

What about these mental prisons ....
that so many people live in ....
who are ... materially ... driven
kind of like .... that .... Robin Givens ...

No love, shame or forgiveness
just hunters for those riches
befitting of those bitches ....
with glitches .... just like ...
Eastwicks Witches ....

males and females
with thoughtwaves frail
have been derailed
because they sailed
on the devils trail

no golden fleece ....
just flocks of sheep
who choose to creep
rather than be seen
to be less mean

it's all a dream ....
just ask .... demi ....
ghosts imprison
mental visions

avoid these prisons
take time and listen
to visions that glisten
and avoid encryption

Mind upliftment
is what we're missing
it's not forbidden
to be a little different

and use your mind
to free the binds
of societal ties ...

break from the guise
of minds contrived
to fit like ties
around the necks
of corporate heads ....
and those that tend
to act like feds ....

minds controlled
like Sauron trolls
to do their work
amongst the dirt ... !!!

like those .... "imprisoned" .....

by their .... "Mental Prisons !!!!"

Peace Y'all

Dig in them archives
on this here site

http://bigvirge.com/

Peace y'all .... Stay strong .....

Appreciate the feed... And BigV, nice drop there, got a nice spoken word feel about it.

Cheers Intrinsic .... !!!