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Re: Are You G?
Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2011 2:11 am
by Riggz
I thought I replied to this in the Writtens. I liked it there too didn't I? If not, great piece Rugged:
No choice but to follow my lead, while I make history//
I’ma drink pineapple juice so you can taste victory//
Losing is sour, come taste the sweeter things in life//
Or back off, you ain't 'double crossing me' like Jesus Christ//
Re: Are You G?
Posted: Tue Mar 29, 2011 3:54 am
by Darryl_Spacely
this would be a good song
Re: Are You G?
Posted: Tue Mar 29, 2011 9:22 am
by Glamtrash
I'd definitely call this more of a written than a oem, nonetheless it's good shit. Well structured, good vocab, good metahorical use etc. I'm a fan of your writing too. Kee em comin, kid.
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Re: Are You G?
Posted: Tue Mar 29, 2011 9:42 am
by Immortal Jav
yeah sounded like a written but tight rather written or not
Re: Are You G?
Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2011 5:18 am
by thadevious1
if it's a tight written, written it's not considered a real poem
cause it's a half assed attempt, at rap posted in the poetry forum
