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Here's my first drop on the site, check....,

It's the most lyrical one, you fear when I come...
like a braud that missed her period son, you rookies hear me and run...
when I drop a verse that's it....period...done...
I haunt the SHADOWS of ya NIGHTmares, then I reappear with the SUN...
I leave the murder scene and it's clearly been won, give son his respect...
I'm used to rappin/WRAPPIN lines tight when I come at ya NECK...
so it's pretty CLEAR HE'S BEEN HUNG, it appears I've become...
the superior one......you're too damn inexperienced dun...
my rhythm sears through the drums in the ears of the young...
you just releasing hot air, like you was a bullet that pierced through a lung!!!
so shiver in fright when grippin the mic...souls are buried...
don't compare me to posers that flow to hold a grammy...
so bring ya rhymes to the alter, and drop a hot written...
don't think that I'ma exalt ya, unless you got rhythm...
but now I gotta depart ya, cause you did not listen...
I'm bout to butter and salt ya, just like a hot biscuit!!!
f*** it I'll stalk ya, with demon eyes I approach thee...
til ur scared to touch the DIAL/dial, like you just like to be dirty...
then red dot you like a pirate with scurvy....
and kill ya dreams while ur still a teen, to be alive and survive through ya 30's...
chumps die if they touch mine's/MINES....
unless you wanna walk without ya knees, practice caution and proceed!!!
cause I'm fast paced I'm yawning at ya speed, oh you spit a rhyme...
that was sick as mine, my bad dog I was asleep...
I quick enough to smack Satan, while we bicker in hell...
and escape from the 9th ring, without a blistering cell...
whenever you envision ya skill, you should picture a snail...
that's been sniffed and inhaled to rot inside of a prisoner's jail...
that we know as ya cranium, you couldn't even piss...
a golden flow, so there's no doubt that you will remain a bum...
I know I'm pissin off the fakers on the mic...
don't love me cause I'm whack, I want you to hate me cause I'm nice...

This is street music B, I ain't throwin no party anthems...
and I'ma keep doin me, even tho you can hardly stand him...
I got you amazed how I've cleverly done it, and bring the drama and pain...
to whoever should want it, now who's next to be punished?...

Somebody weak on a track....I'll shut em down...
he tryna speak from his ass?...I'll shut him down...
for a lame to drop a quote, in my lane he's got to choke...
peep the disclaimer that I wrote..."you can't hang without a rope"...

(WHOA).....now you've had ya 30 seconds to relax...
I done traveled through the 3rd dimension and I'm back...
in a flash, bashing foes with a battle axe in the back...
of the throat, gashing leaving ya Adam's apple detached!!!
I match any rapper clappin a gat, that ish is funny...
I'll straight grab it and laugh like, "just drop down and give me twenty"...
while you were busy I gripped ya honey....slipped the twenty in her mouth...
hit her tummy?, homie I'm strokin til I hit the money...
I tear shyt up like a bad drill, my pen and pad still...
addicted to Advil because I'm that ill...
with mad skill...no Hummer, I ain't braggin with a fat deal...
but I'm still tippin, cause my stationwagon got a flat wheel...
that's why they label me a loser to the public...
cause I refuse to be subdued, I'm too cool to be a puppet...
don't say that I'm abusive, I just choose to be destructive....
and I blaze like an acoustic, I'm not the dude you wanna f*** with!!!
go head....think that I'm scared to hit ya, I'll have you flying...
like a pair of scissors, that a clumsy chid was prepared to give ya...
then choke you to silence, til ya bloodstream is turning to violet...
stripping you of oxygen, quicker than your hemoglobin can bind it!!!
my biggest slip up to this date, I took an eraser tip....
erased a six from a kid's head, and scribbled an eight...
as soon as the razor tip hit my vein it split...
not my vein but the razor, I guess my pipes weren't made to drip...
but you leak like a broken cup, I'll poke ur guts...
until I glaze ya ribs, and make you bleed red like you hate the Crips...
I BEES the block cause I'm dope as uck, holmes you aim and miss..
you couldn't even hold a BUZZ if ya name was SID!!! (lol)
(Street Illuminati)......you cain't correct us cause we came to wreck ya...
we puttin RED DOTS on these BLACK SQUARES, like a game of Checkers...
to take you back to the time, when you used to pray...
you couldn't even be next to I, if you were J/Jay(Z)!!!

Hook-

I remember peepin' this shit awhile ago on RB, and the fact I remembered it says somethin', shit is still dope, too much shit to quote, all around ill shit.

Thanx for the look fam. You remembered this off of RB?, is that RapBattle.com? I can't remember if I was on that forum before.

first of welcome to illest.......stay active.......that shit was dope keep up the good work......get yaself known
slicka

This was dope bro, if all of your other drops are this good then i'm looking forward to reading more of them.

Much appreciated, will do.

-- Sat Nov 27, 2010 3:06 pm --

DaPrince wrote:This was dope bro, if all of your other drops are this good then i'm looking forward to reading more of them.

No doubt, thanx for the love.

Lyrical Gen wrote:Thanx for the look fam. You remembered this off of RB?, is that RapBattle.com? I can't remember if I was on that forum before.

Maybe it was rapcapital? I'm not sure, I went by the name Genesis at the time.

^^^O ok, I definitely know who you are I now. I dropped this on there like 2 years ago. I recall you being pretty good yourself. When did that site get shut down btw?

Phasewon wrote:

Lyrical Gen wrote:Thanx for the look fam. You remembered this off of RB?, is that RapBattle.com? I can't remember if I was on that forum before.

Maybe it was rapcapital? I'm not sure, I went by the name Genesis at the time.

I remember you from RAPCAP. That place had potential until it fell off. I remember gettin robbed v Khophyn. DYNASTY robbed me of 5 votes and I rematched Khophyn with a opening verse so cold that Khophyn--who I liked--took months to respond. And I proceeded to wreck everybody else.

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This was a smooth drop man a lot of the punches were strung together nicely the beginning was kinda bumpy I was like ehhhh but as you got further into it you really went in...pretty good stuff my dude...you tore into this piece...keep doing u

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Thanx for the compliments, I appreciate the feed.

as i come in shootin a jays...i accidently high jacked.....and took a cruise .....its no abnormality ....when its all about fly....planes droppin like donuts out the sky...press...disfunctionate the course....differ the zone.....omnipotent i pop lock out tented windows....erradicate beach after beach...a itch for eather each bitch ....verb...defined chorus inline....wondering their mine....your death is fine...in hellish selfish flames of eyes....a norm could disguise....a wizard or art since the dumb of times...no matter if you missin dimes....in your rymes limbs burn to next update milk shakes and french fries....you know what i'll turn to electrical waattz and shatter your pelvis with percise energy and then the next thing ya whole krew feel your pain and yall all die........ghost one ever...can i cannon yes i'm very clever.....call me soon doom em unit999999.....count them so you can get crusified.....sorry but no worry....i've herd your story....i'm hard core that bout it shorty....i'm collecting whats be me....nam sayn....get to goin....dont care if you here to hear me flowin....what the deal is....you think that joker shit i'm that lok with no estimate.......pedigree degree and percentage....ya age dont mean a thang to be.....to me.....leathal...i'ma breath evil.....in smoke.......not mine....ever clear never.....i'm born....to the whole...morgue ooze....deliver and developer.........thats it......thats the lick...fuck a envy of envy fuck a envy of any....up they asses triggas and more mallasses......why an eveloped pregnat bitch with your kid....for permanent recognition.....florensik.....sik wicked......before wik can help it....come one come all get set get raw.....youll be dead wrong because the gods up with thumbs down all origin with original...yo you cry a tear and i wont wipe but turn your mik off

^^^TROLL ALERT!!!

The flow was really good. Had some nice punch lines scattered through out. Too many to quote. I really liked the multies in this part:

that's why they label me a loser to the public...
cause I refuse to be subdued, I'm too cool to be a puppet...
don't say that I'm abusive, I just choose to be destructive....
and I blaze like an acoustic, I'm not the dude you wanna f*** with!!!

Keep it up man, looking forward to more.

Everything on point here kept me reading and intrested never a dull moment in the verses n I feel every bar hit the way u wanted it to would be a sick audio to listen to reminds me of a dblock go hard type of piece good work hope to see more

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