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Look at those lips, I'll show you how Bubba 'Sparks' when I ignite ratchets...
Sock this bitch up like cold feet, look at his hat, you can tell I'm right handed... SMACK!

Sorry to be so honest, but there's no way you'll make it, your shit's way too basic...
Beating Haz off w/ two hands don't make you ambidextrous, but it does make you Creative...

Eli Porter get off illest! no matter how my flow turns out, the votes work out...
You Look like a kid Wesley Snipes would have, if he had Autism & a low sperm count...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q-b6uN7S ... re=related

I'm killing him & yes I love it, I'm nice with the flow but with the pen I punish...
When he told Haz "Time For Me To Carry It To The Next Level"... he meant my luggage...

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/when- ... 18560.htmt

You can leave like Forrest.

You take off like a beaten house wife, but find reasons to settle back...
Here's some honest feed: leaving was the only "Creative Idea" you ever had...
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Faggot Ass Colon Giver, This 'C's Section' How Obvious He Can't Deliver
Profound! A ' Most Interesting Man' Maggots A Stan That Follows Twitter

http://twitter.com/#search?q=most%20interesting%20man

At A 'Loss 4 Words', This Awkward Nerd's A College Quitter
Ain't 'In My League', 'C's/Seas 2 Deep' 4 Yall Common Fishers

Immobilize You, Cut Both Ya Limbs, Throw Stones & Bust Ya Ribs
The 'Savior of Hip-Hop'? Hell No, We Don't Fuck Wit MIMS !

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mims_%28rapper%29

Holds Skill With 'Ball Points', MIMS Gay We All Know It
So The 'Most Interest in Men' He Takes.. Are Called 'Poets'

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/where ... 17877.html

Even Wit A Nas Classic, You Still Wouldn't Be 'The Man'
This Fag 'Believes He Can' Man FRUCKKK Peter Pan

The Man:
Look at those lips, I'll show you how Bubba 'Sparks' when I ignite ratchets...
Sock this bitch up like cold feet, look at his hat, you can tell I'm right handed... SMACK!
[3 – The set up was better than the delivery, creative punch tho (no pun intended)]
Sorry to be so honest, but there's no way you'll make it, your shit's way too basic...
Beating Haz off w/ two hands don't make you ambidextrous, but it does make you Creative...
[3 – Nice personal and rhyme structure]
Eli Porter get off illest! no matter how my flow turns out, the votes work out...
You Look like a kid Wesley Snipes would have, if he had Autism & a low sperm count...
[4 – LMFAO!!!!! Wesley Snipes LMFAO!!!!!! Nice set up and excellent punch]

I'm killing him & yes I love it, I'm nice with the flow but with the pen I punish...
When he told Haz "Time For Me To Carry It To The Next Level"... he meant my luggage...
[3 Nice personal, flow was a little off.. but liked the set up and delivery]
You take off like a beaten house wife, but find reasons to settle back...
Here's some honest feed: leaving was the only "Creative Idea" you ever had...
[3 – decent personal ending]
16/20 Above Average This had great personals which I tend to lean more towards in battles especially with hilarious puns. Nice verse

Creative:
Faggot Ass Colon Giver, This 'C's Section' How Obvious He Can't Deliver
Profound! A ' Most Interesting Man' Maggots A Stan That Follows Twitter
[2.5 The set up was good.. should’ve followed it on the punch. You were going somewhere with it and let it go]

At A 'Loss 4 Words', This Awkward Nerd's A College Quitter
Ain't 'In My League', 'C's/Seas 2 Deep' 4 Yall Common Fishers
[2.5 ok, I liked the multies but the punch wasn’t direct. Plus you appear to be playing more on your name than you are on your oppenant]

Immobilize You, Cut Both Ya Limbs, Throw Stones & Bust Ya Ribs
The 'Savior of Hip-Hop'? Hell No, We Don't Fuck Wit MIMS !
[2.5 Right now you riding average, decent rhyme schemes, decent set-ups, but falling short on the delivery. Nothings jellin’]


Holds Skill With 'Ball Points', MIMS Gay We All Know It
So The 'Most Interest in Men' He Takes.. Are Called 'Poets'
[2 Here the punch just wasn’t any good. You could’ve followed up with some “This is Why I’m hot” joint from MIMS but yet you send us to a link by Rugged?]

Even Wit A Nas Classic, You Still Wouldn't Be 'The Man'
This Fag 'Believes He Can' Man FRUCKKK Peter Pan
[2 Why don’t you try switching your set up and your punch around (and in this case just delete the entire last line)]
11.5/20 Average - Creative you still getting it together.. you’ve come a good ways since you started.. you just have to put this all together a little better.

The Man takes this victory.

Riggz wrote:The Man:
Look at those lips, I'll show you how Bubba 'Sparks' when I ignite ratchets...
Sock this bitch up like cold feet, look at his hat, you can tell I'm right handed... SMACK!
[3 – The set up was better than the delivery, creative punch tho (no pun intended)]
Sorry to be so honest, but there's no way you'll make it, your shit's way too basic...
Beating Haz off w/ two hands don't make you ambidextrous, but it does make you Creative...
[3 – Nice personal and rhyme structure]
Eli Porter get off illest! no matter how my flow turns out, the votes work out...
You Look like a kid Wesley Snipes would have, if he had Autism & a low sperm count...
[4 – LMFAO!!!!! Wesley Snipes LMFAO!!!!!! Nice set up and excellent punch]

I'm killing him & yes I love it, I'm nice with the flow but with the pen I punish...
When he told Haz "Time For Me To Carry It To The Next Level"... he meant my luggage...
[3 Nice personal, flow was a little off.. but liked the set up and delivery]
You take off like a beaten house wife, but find reasons to settle back...
Here's some honest feed: leaving was the only "Creative Idea" you ever had...
[3 – decent personal ending]
16/20 Above Average This had great personals which I tend to lean more towards in battles especially with hilarious puns. Nice verse

Creative:
Faggot Ass Colon Giver, This 'C's Section' How Obvious He Can't Deliver
Profound! A ' Most Interesting Man' Maggots A Stan That Follows Twitter
[2.5 The set up was good.. should’ve followed it on the punch. You were going somewhere with it and let it go]

At A 'Loss 4 Words', This Awkward Nerd's A College Quitter
Ain't 'In My League', 'C's/Seas 2 Deep' 4 Yall Common Fishers
[2.5 ok, I liked the multies but the punch wasn’t direct. Plus you appear to be playing more on your name than you are on your oppenant]

Immobilize You, Cut Both Ya Limbs, Throw Stones & Bust Ya Ribs
The 'Savior of Hip-Hop'? Hell No, We Don't Fuck Wit MIMS !
[2.5 Right now you riding average, decent rhyme schemes, decent set-ups, but falling short on the delivery. Nothings jellin’]


Holds Skill With 'Ball Points', MIMS Gay We All Know It
So The 'Most Interest in Men' He Takes.. Are Called 'Poets'
[2 Here the punch just wasn’t any good. You could’ve followed up with some “This is Why I’m hot” joint from MIMS but yet you send us to a link by Rugged?]

Even Wit A Nas Classic, You Still Wouldn't Be 'The Man'
This Fag 'Believes He Can' Man FRUCKKK Peter Pan
[2 Why don’t you try switching your set up and your punch around (and in this case just delete the entire last line)]
11.5/20 Average - Creative you still getting it together.. you’ve come a good ways since you started.. you just have to put this all together a little better.

The Man takes this victory.

Except for the fact that I liked t he C'stoo deep for you/Seas too deep for you" punch--too many people don't understand that you can diss your oppponent by giving yourself props too,and it's not given the pros that it deserves as being essential 1/5 of the types of punches that can be given in battles and can be summed up as the braggadocio type punch--I concur with aL-b's analysis.

VOTE: THE MAN.

M.I.M....

Look at those lips, I'll show you how Bubba 'Sparks' when I ignite ratchets...
Sock this bitch up like cold feet, look at his hat, you can tell I'm right handed... SMACK!
^^^ nice wordplay and flow, funny but not a hard hitting punch...3.5/5

Sorry to be so honest, but there's no way you'll make it, your shit's way too basic...
Beating Haz off w/ two hands don't make you ambidextrous, but it does make you Creative...
^^^ personal punch, okay flow...3/5

Eli Porter get off illest! no matter how my flow turns out, the votes work out...
You Look like a kid Wesley Snipes would have, if he had Autism & a low sperm count...
^^^ see...I wasn't really feeling this one, meh punch but flow makes up for it...3/5

I'm killing him & yes I love it, I'm nice with the flow but with the pen I punish...
When he told Haz "Time For Me To Carry It To The Next Level"... he meant my luggage...
^^^ this was perfect flow, nice personal and punch...4/5

You take off like a beaten house wife, but find reasons to settle back...
Here's some honest feed: leaving was the only "Creative Idea" you ever had...
^^^ nice personal, decent punch...3.5/5

17/25

Creative...

Faggot Ass Colon Giver, This 'C's Section' How Obvious He Can't Deliver
Profound! A ' Most Interesting Man' Maggots A Stan That Follows Twitter
^^^ good flow but weak punch, like riggz mentioned...could've been killer if punch followed set up...2/5

At A 'Loss 4 Words', This Awkward Nerd's A College Quitter
Ain't 'In My League', 'C's/Seas 2 Deep' 4 Yall Common Fishers
^^^ flow was on point, like the wordplay, but punch is not attacking opponent...3/5

Immobilize You, Cut Both Ya Limbs, Throw Stones & Bust Ya Ribs
The 'Savior of Hip-Hop'? Hell No, We Don't Fuck Wit MIMS !
^^^ meh on the flow, okay nameplay...2/5

Holds Skill With 'Ball Points', MIMS Gay We All Know It
So The 'Most Interest in Men' He Takes.. Are Called 'Poets'
^^^ I like the flow, but no...this didn't hit at all for me...2/5

Even Wit A Nas Classic, You Still Wouldn't Be 'The Man'
This Fag 'Believes He Can' Man FRUCKKK Peter Pan
^^^ I did notice and feel this bar is backwards, even if, I feel that this was ur weakest bar...2/5

11/25

MVGT: M.I.M.

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Knocked out.

Thank you.

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