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-- Tue Dec 07, 2010 4:20 pm --

Man this is hardly a contest, you can get bodied with the rest
Only time I see "OMNI" flow "all over the place" is when this shotty hits ya chest/

Your spits are 'rocky' at its best, I gotta 'STALL ONE' match for a battle with this dude?
The shit you breed is "BULLSHIT" homie, and I'm not talking mixing a "bull"dog with a "shit"zu/

You can get hit with fists too, not just punchlines, though you devour em like its lunch time
The fact your wack ass still hangs around this site makes me think its the re-birth of crunch time/
(ThatSexyDude is Crunch Time - http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/murk- ... 18498.html)

You should be like fuck rhymes, rap, and punches, cause your lyrical jabs are poorly traded
Bars of steel? That can't be true when you're named after some company with plastics incorporated!!!
http://www.omnithermoplastics.com/

Fantastic 4 bars, so my lines'll burn ya with-flames-on 'til the-pain's-gone...
Plus, the lines you punch-with,-feminine so I'm crunchin'-M&M's and I aint talking 'bout a lil-wayne-song*

Actin' like you the-shit-merv, fact is you look like a-sick-perv, problem?...I masticate-all-the-beef
For real, ya need work to eMCee, so the only reason Murk's Nasty is cuz he Masterbates-Constantly**

Everyone-look, the verses-of-Murk are the Kuhler-of-durt, ya rah(raw)styles-shitty-to-me
This aint ya site, so quit being a brown-noser, actin' like you com,-poser, and I don't mean just any-symphony***

Omni's not going on that Murk'd-list ya twerp-bitch, with shit on ya face..how ya gonna act dignified?
Pussy, it's dicks-you-ride that vote on your weakest-rhymes...but check it, next is 13 & 5!!!****...

...BOOM!!!

Sorry, I can't post pics or links but...
*song=stunting like my daddy=lil wayne saying, "show me my opponent" while eating M&M's
**check pic on Murk VS Moe battle
***http://www.rahstyles.com/introduction-h ... -site.html <---check site and you'll understand/comPLEXITY,-poser...get it???
****check pic on Murk VS Quix battle or VS Catch22

Punches - Murk
Multies - Tie
Flow - Murk
VOte - Murk

Murk - Seen you come harder. Good enough for the win but still under par from what I've seen you spit. 2 Universal punches and then 2 direct. I liked the crunchtime punch the best, even though it didn't really get at Omni

Omni - You had a nice opportunity here. I thought you had good ideas (attacking his name and his advancement on the sites) but just wasn't worded effectively.

Decent battle

Murk:
Man this is hardly a contest, you can get bodied with the rest
Only time I see "OMNI" flow "all over the place" is when this shotty hits ya chest/
(3 Multies kept this alive)

Your spits are 'rocky' at its best, I gotta 'STALL ONE' match for a battle with this dude?
The shit you breed is "BULLSHIT" homie, and I'm not talking mixing a "bull"dog with a "shit"zu/
(2.5 played concept)
You can get hit with fists too, not just punchlines, though you devour em like its lunch time
The fact your wack ass still hangs around this site makes me think its the re-birth of crunch time/
(3.5 nice personal.. funny)

You should be like fuck rhymes, rap, and punches, cause your lyrical jabs are poorly traded
Bars of steel? That can't be true when you're named after some company with plastics incorporated!!!
(3 nice punch, flow was off)

OMNI:
Fantastic 4 bars, so my lines'll burn ya with-flames-on 'til the-pain's-gone...
Plus, the lines you punch-with,-feminine so I'm crunchin'-M&M's and I aint talking 'bout a lil-wayne-song*
(3 nice opener, little stretched)
Actin' like you the-shit-merv, fact is you look like a-sick-perv, problem?...I masticate-all-the-beef
For real, ya need work to eMCee, so the only reason Murk's Nasty is cuz he Masterbates-Constantly**
(2.5 Bar is way too stretched and weak punch)
Everyone-look, the verses-of-Murk are the Kuhler-of-durt, ya rah(raw)styles-shitty-to-me
This aint ya site, so quit being a brown-noser, actin' like you com,-poser, and I don't mean just any-symphony***
(2.5 I don’t mean just any symphony??? What?)
Omni's not going on that Murk'd-list ya twerp-bitch, with shit on ya face..how ya gonna act dignified?
Pussy, it's dicks-you-ride that vote on your weakest-rhymes...but check it, next is 13 & 5!!!****...
(2.5 As Seq stated referring to record stats is a played concept unless you come with something tight not just referencing it as the next W or L)

Tally – Murk: 12/20 Omni: 10.5/20
Vote = Murk

A 'composer' of 'symphonies'...hello?
Appreciate the votes though guys...1-1

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I got that Omni, what i'm saying is the punch could've been clearer.. like "...actin' like you com,-poser without any symphony"...
Stating the words "and I don't mean just" seems out of place in the punch. Sometimes it's a few words that change the whole meaning of a sentence.
G/L with the rest of the votes though.

I see said the blind man to his deaf son...
Thanks for the feed, I'm still learning how to tighten up the bars...let the voting continue...

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2-1 uppin 4 votes

Overall I think this was an ok battle, I think both had a few lines that weren't the greatest, but rhyme wise I gotta give it to Omni, personal wise both had a few, Omni had more but his closer was weak, Murk had a decent closer so that's a tie. Punches were a tie too, damn, so, overall I'm gonna have to give this vote to Murk, if Omni had a better closer I think he could of had it.

Vote - Nasty Ass

3-1 uppin' fo votes

Murk took this easily, though ur verse needs help...
too simple punches man. i know u can come harder that talkin bout shotguns and bulldogs..lol but u had enough power to beat Omni...

Omni, i dunno wtf u were thinkin with that verse. it wasnt good. multis were off, punches were bad... too simple as well.. u gotta dig for more personal nameplays... really brainstorm some witty shit and not just the first thing that comes to ur mind..

overall vote: Murk

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