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8bars. house rules verses due 24 after check in.

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-- Tue Nov 30, 2010 7:29 pm --

ill serve phlebiac like serving sunday dinner, its a winner/
expeshily when this kid's still using crayon to draw pictures//
come on plebia when has fungi ever came to a battle and hit hard//*
ill spit so fast i leave him tongue tied, an silence this fucking retard//
my punches hit hard enough to swap poles and disfigured the planets axis/
so i know flee be actress, after this battle his new alias will be alice/
serious no-one like phles so how you planning on burying deception//
lets just face it dawg its about the same chance as imaculate conception//
talking about imaculate conception, how your mama give birth to a flee/
your not specail tho ive seen better text verses off a armless amputee//
id bring fire but we all know a naked flame makes the fle's pop//**
plus i know hes gay, his mam told me shes sick of saliva on the door knobs//
if i come half arsed atleast i wont leave with a de-feet/
ill just come with a grinder, and leave phlebiac as mincemeat//
so now i better wrap this up as it is now aproaching christmas time//
first win under my tree, oh and what does it feel like to get murked with a christmas line//


*phlebia is a type of fungus
**soldiers in the world war but a naked flame over there close to pop tics and flees

Aye Check! .. U'll Sleep Below Rats Cuz Your Under MiceTile, Battle'n The Great Phleb
When I "Lay Text", Its Clear I Con'd`em, Explain'n How I 'Stay Over D' Like Safe Sex
U Turn Ta Ash When My Flows Smolder, Give'n Fake Emcees Like U The Cold Shoulder
Cuz When It Comes To Text Battles , Im "Fly'n Over Ya Bars" Like Olympic Pole Vaulters
My Mission Is Stealth, Going Ninja Style When Im Grippin And Rippin Ya Health
Not To Mention When We See "P All Over U", Its Not Only Cuz U "Piss'n Ya Self"
Your Just Clown'n Right?, Your On A Circus Mission Wit Ya Worthless Writtens?
Well Either Way, Phlebiac'll Show How "D Get'n Cut Short" Like Circumcision
This Graphic Treason, & Aint Prison But Behind My Bars, This Faggots Bleed'n
No Point Going Back To Reason, "Dec Being Cold"?,... Yeah Only As A Season!!
Hide'n Behind Ya Self Ego? ,Play'n Deception'll End Up Mortal Combat, Die & Just Bleed Slow
Kombat Like This? He "Never Seen Or Heard It Come'n" Like "Blind And Def People"
Ya Filler Options Is Fatal, Kid Spit'n, Got Me Feel'n Like Im Boxing A Cradle
2 Much Talkin To Take Tho, No Point, GoWing For The Wins, Like Hawks In Tornatos
Both Eyes'll Bruise When Ya Fight Me, Your "Shit Soft" Like Poop In A Diappie
& When Voters See 2 Dots LEFT on D,.. Trust.. It Wont Be Produce'n A Smilie
Two Dots : <~~ Left On D =

Phlebiac's verse without a doubt contained better punchlines, rhymes, and personal nameplays. Deception, you didn't have a really really bad verse but it just wasn't suited for a battle, especially with someone of P's caliber. Really no need to break down since Phleb would take it in ever category. I liked Phleb's last bar the best. Seen a couple attempts at bars referencing smilies and that was probably the best executed.

-Punches - Phle "Your Just Clown'n Right?, Your On A Circus Mission Wit Ya Worthless Writtens?
Well Either Way, Phlebiac'll Show How "D Get'n Cut Short" Like Circumcision" - ouch
-Flow - Phle had better cadence. A few of D's lines were too long
-Personals - Decp (the momma line was kind of a personal i guess) Phle didn't go that direction
-Multies - Phle
-Most enjoyable - Phle

Vote - Phle

Punches - Phlebiac
Flow - Phlebiac
Personas - Phlebiac

Phlebiac came with way better set-ups and punches. Took the personals with nameplay and the flow was on point. Deception's verse just felt weak as hell. Nothing stood out to me from his verse. I agree with colossus about it not being a suitable battle verse. Should've come harder...

Vote- Phlebiac

i vote phle as welll 4-0....guess i gotta get on my mod grind