i conquered-my-fears and all the pain-i-fought,
but a coward-by-tears and no train-of-thought,
depression twisted my organs so they remain-a-knot,
with nothing left for me to lose, i can gain-alot,
death threw my mind in a sink so it drains-the-spot,
but torment such as this will cause ya brains-to-rot,
--AFTER EFFECT--
complex focus overlooked the weakest-contents,
just a lil bit psychotic...so all i speak-is-nonsense,
even in 'third person' 'HE' gives oblique-responses,
so now these demons spawn to seek-his-conscience....
this was actually kinda text freestyled lol.. n e ways the poem or w/e u wanna call it.. is about a soldier losing the war within his own mind.. and darkness takes over... leave some feedback
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umm wat.. the ending could be twisted.. with ur name being complex... do u mean like.. i could've been talking about u? becuz i start off with "complex" focus.. and then i say he and ending with his conscience.. if so than yea i suppose it could've been, although i mention myself speaking nonsense due to insanity and i talk about going third person.. that's when i start talking about MYSELF in third person...to follow the psychotic part of the poem.. and yea i can do 16 bars.. but this is more like.. the intro.. and starting middle.. next i'll finish this with the ending middle and outro...
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