(Eman On)

[Riggz]

Rugged, the metaphores in this shit is off the chain man. I loved the read... honestly. I don't have a bad thing to say about it. I'm just going to drop a few quotes:
"Here I'm sick of home, gone I'm home sick//
All these sticks & stones make my bones rift// " - This kept me reading right off the bat.

"Losing is sour, come taste the sweeter things in life//
Or back off, you ain't 'double crossing me' like Jesus Christ//" - Holy shit, nice one

"Got balls full of karma... when I come, it goes, around//
Since I'm an asshole... the only way, shit goes, is down// " - I hollared when I saw that one!

"Arms stretch, reach for the stars & touch its sharp edge//
I'ma power forward to some green, "sell-tix" like Kevin Garnett//
Fuck "carrying the heat" like Lebron, not trying to be cavalier//
But I promise the only reason I got my hand out, is so I can catch your tears//" - that was straight street right there.. well thought out and put together bars right there. Bravo!

"The shit friends think while trying to offend me, forget peace//
If ends meet while fighting for ends meat, then lets beef//" - Nice play on words very nice...

"Put it down regardless, keep my head up like my nose bloody//
Mobile's always on silent, no wonder I ain't vibing w/ nobody//" - lmfao! I loved that one...

Rugged, you have a hell of a way with words man. Excellent Read. One I'll come back to later, just for inspiration.

[QwarterZ]

This was a nice drop Rugged....far from your usual...well compared to what I've read from you...but still good nonetheless...you kept my attention throughout the whole piece..really let your word play shine on this...which makes the whole thing worth reading....very smooth flow in this....nice drop man...keep doing you

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