Re: (No Name)
Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 7:16 am
Rugged, the metaphores in this shit is off the chain man. I loved the read... honestly. I don't have a bad thing to say about it. I'm just going to drop a few quotes:
"Here I'm sick of home, gone I'm home sick//
All these sticks & stones make my bones rift// " - This kept me reading right off the bat.
"Losing is sour, come taste the sweeter things in life//
Or back off, you ain't 'double crossing me' like Jesus Christ//" - Holy shit, nice one
"Got balls full of karma... when I come, it goes, around//
Since I'm an asshole... the only way, shit goes, is down// " - I hollared when I saw that one!
"Arms stretch, reach for the stars & touch its sharp edge//
I'ma power forward to some green, "sell-tix" like Kevin Garnett//
Fuck "carrying the heat" like Lebron, not trying to be cavalier//
But I promise the only reason I got my hand out, is so I can catch your tears//" - that was straight street right there.. well thought out and put together bars right there. Bravo!
"The shit friends think while trying to offend me, forget peace//
If ends meet while fighting for ends meat, then lets beef//" - Nice play on words very nice...
"Put it down regardless, keep my head up like my nose bloody//
Mobile's always on silent, no wonder I ain't vibing w/ nobody//" - lmfao! I loved that one...
Rugged, you have a hell of a way with words man. Excellent Read. One I'll come back to later, just for inspiration.
"Here I'm sick of home, gone I'm home sick//
All these sticks & stones make my bones rift// " - This kept me reading right off the bat.
"Losing is sour, come taste the sweeter things in life//
Or back off, you ain't 'double crossing me' like Jesus Christ//" - Holy shit, nice one
"Got balls full of karma... when I come, it goes, around//
Since I'm an asshole... the only way, shit goes, is down// " - I hollared when I saw that one!
"Arms stretch, reach for the stars & touch its sharp edge//
I'ma power forward to some green, "sell-tix" like Kevin Garnett//
Fuck "carrying the heat" like Lebron, not trying to be cavalier//
But I promise the only reason I got my hand out, is so I can catch your tears//" - that was straight street right there.. well thought out and put together bars right there. Bravo!
"The shit friends think while trying to offend me, forget peace//
If ends meet while fighting for ends meat, then lets beef//" - Nice play on words very nice...
"Put it down regardless, keep my head up like my nose bloody//
Mobile's always on silent, no wonder I ain't vibing w/ nobody//" - lmfao! I loved that one...
Rugged, you have a hell of a way with words man. Excellent Read. One I'll come back to later, just for inspiration.
