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Back to your regular schedule another instrumental
twisted by the ligaments, left you a slight pigment
change...brain by the dozen, chains by the hundreds
lames in abundance, always tryna proclaim they substance
is better then what I have to offer, Prince & The Pauper
switch lanes on imposters, drop ya off from the helicopter
freezin' cold, seizin' folds of money, leasin' homes
ya dummy, I got the game in the weakest hold, releasin' notes
I guess I'm throwin' money down, without another sound
pound for pound, I'm a europeans dream from a money cloud
let it rain, rain so much you could never ever clear it out
what that bitch talkin' bout, chicken noodle soup, fuckin' clowns
I'm sick, so sick you need to get over yourself when I write
if I write, and take the time to combine a proper set...right?
colonapin, it'll just go and fuck up your stupid posturin'
I'm lost again, tossin' win's up like Kobe in the last quarter
QwarterZ, I'm locked up in my own mind tryna get it back in order
slaughterin' pig's for the fuck of it, while y'all keep suckin' dick
lovin' it, Little Brother, no judge, I meant, no judgement
plus I'm buzzin' in my black and yellow, and I cuff the bitch
so see ya, see ya, I'm on a different frontier with my ceaser
I'm on a fleet of, ships that change into a mu'fuckin' transformer
my plan's border, the board, but won't put it back in order
I sorta, used the same line, but who gives a fuck you ain't sayin' it like I am
flyin' in a wife beater, I guess you could say I called in a heavyweight
deadly catch, heavenly taste, devil cake and all that other cheeba
rolled up, so tight, tighter then the jeans on Wiz Khalifa
put that on lock, right in a digipack, digimon, give the city crack
watch them go into convulsions, blow the house down, where them piggies at?
I will, piss on your entrance, and then ask for my fifty back
say your performance was ass...yea, I'ma just call that a shitty act
sittin' on the top of the world, till I break it down...Heffer
now it's time to overdose on these Jokers, insert wack line...Heath Ledger
my mind is past the stupidity but I keep comin' back waitin' for unity
and if it's you and me and you don't like what I consider to do as me....
then fuck you...fuck you with a dildo made out of the AIDS Virus
and while you contemplate the meaning of this piece I'm just goin to leave the stage....



silent

amazing

"change...brain by the dozen, chains by the hundreds
lames in abundance, always tryna proclaim they substance"

^^tasteful display of skill, definitly nice in the beat

"I'm lost again, tossin' win's up like Kobe in the last quarter
QwarterZ, I'm locked up in my own mind tryna get it back in order"

^^ effin Kobe man, nice name drop on both, yours and his


"I will, piss on your entrance, and then ask for my fifty back
say your performance was ass...yea, I'ma just call that a shitty act"

Somein i picture Immortal or Tonedeff saying lol

"then fuck you...fuck you with a dildo made out of the AIDS Virus
and while you contemplate the meaning of this piece I'm just goin to leave the stage...."


^^^ now thats a nice closer, something you could say and really walk away from as you drop the mic... Nice drop man, you got a nice style, keep droppin

This was pretty good, I was reading it out loud and it flowed very well with the beat. The wording was well put together

change...brain by the dozen, chains by the hundreds
lames in abundance, always tryna proclaim they substance
^^^Lol applause, preach to the choir fam

I guess I'm throwin' money down, without another sound
pound for pound, I'm a europeans dream from a money cloud
let it rain, rain so much you could never ever clear it out
what that bitch talkin' bout, chicken noodle soup, fuckin' clowns
I'm sick, so sick you need to get over yourself when I write
if I write, and take the time to combine a proper set...right?
^^^That was ill, the switch-up in rhymescheme blended in perfectly and you had me rolling with that chicken noodle soup line lolol


sittin' on the top of the world, till I break it down...Heffer
now it's time to overdose on these Jokers, insert wack line...Heath Ledger
^^^Idk if you were making fun of how Wayne and Drake drop a reference after every punch as if it's hot, but that shyt was funny.

This was much better than the other drop I left feed on. Good shyt, keep writin.