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6 Barz.
Verse due by sat.

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Check...

I'll try by Sat. but more than likely its gon' be on Sunday.

Listen!!!!!



This pussy's never Heard this guy Define's Silent plus he Lie's Rhymin..
I'll Hit ya wit Combined Violence..you'll get tossed of any Mountain ya try Climin..
Messin wit me..My punches'll hit ya in Tha gut bring ya Chest to ya Knees..
Ya no vet!Ya acceptance is Weak! A lost soul like a baby bein left on Tha streets..
If defeat is what u seek then I can grant wishes bring ya crew let ya Whole Camp Witness..
How I control Tha throne N ya old bones can barely stand like an Old Man Pissin..
It's so sickening how ya description matches all That I Mutilate on Illest..
What popeye You Done Ate Ya Spinach? Bitch please I'll renovate ya Fate when I'm Finished!!..
His swagg is gassed up and I'll be quick to fuckin Spark his Ego..
Some one tell this guy I'll swell his eyes like pacio did Margarito!!!..
Ya Gunz Jam for Many I'm makin it hard to breath like Mexicans Crammed in Chevys..
Ya Not Serious! I Treated Ya juss like another Fat Bitch like Lisa Lampanelli!!!!.....

Somethin' quick to sonn this kidd

Look dunny...


I notice the beef is nonsense, but God kidd, quit postin' n leave the spot quick
Try to fuck wit you, its guarenteed that Men allow us, like the Trojan and Greek conflict

I know ya peeps has got chips, 631? that's Suffolk Co, and I sadly bet its hard
Suffolk one of the richest spots, so it's difficult to be a Mennace wit Daddies credit card

At 22 n 16, thats plenty dues and whippings leavin' Menace a mess on the street
Nigga, my text is a beast, & I got crowns next to my fist too, along wit the rest of ya teeth!

Confess that ya beat, an incredible breather to leave ya in a medical seizure
So claim the top, niggas be lookin’ up to Men Tore like a respectable teacher

Menace, I can’t believe ya dumb shit, I’ll come wit the heater tucked quick
Funny you reppin’ a crew that’s inactive especially since ya leader jumped ship

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This some physical shit, Menace a pitiful bitch while Jacks exposin’ plenty there
Focus, ya simply scared, & I’d be happy to stop the movement but you aint goin’ anywhere

Uppin

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No doubt, good run Menace. 'preciate the battle homie.

MENACE showed! That's a fuckin' feat in itself LMFAO!
But damn Menace, i don't think you dropped one "direct" bar at Jack. Plus you used "Popeye and spinach".. that's an automatic disqualification from any battle LOL!
But naw really, your indirect punches may have cost you this battle. Don't think you did your homework in this battle my man.

Jack's attacks were direct and that personal about his leader jumping ship was hilarious.
I would say Jack didn't really try hard on this one (but neither did Menace for that matter). He threw in just enough name plays and punches to pull off a cat sweep except for maybe multies.

Vote=Jack

This battle was a bit soft so I'm not gonna break it down, Jack won in pretty much every category. This was a bit of a wash out, as sad as it sounds I've heard a few Lisa Lampinelli lines, Jack's verse was alright, he didn't really have anything that stood out, his last line was nice and credit card line too. Menace had nothing personal, which wouldn't of mattered if some of his lines had some power to them, but most just seemed lazy, same with Jack's, but Jack came direct with some of his lines and that gives him my vote.

Best Line Menace -

His swagg is gassed up and I'll be quick to fuckin Spark his Ego..
Some one tell this guy I'll swell his eyes like pacio did Margarito!!!..

Best Line Jack -

Menace, I can’t believe ya dumb shit, I’ll come wit the heater tucked quick
Funny you reppin’ a crew that’s inactive especially since ya leader jumped ship

Thx 4 peepin'.

Uppin....

Word, this was a little less than I expected out of this battle, and I can pretty much just throw it out in cats right quick to let you know how I decided my vote. Flow, I would give to Mutual, because his was just a little more smooth to me, but Jack had some sick multi's that kinda evened this cat out for me. Punches and personals went to Jack also, not for have more, but just for having more solid and consistant punches. Creativity would go to Jack also, just for the nameflips. I wanted to get more out of this one, but both guys didnt seem to come hard as usual, and I agree it seems like Jack held back more than I've ever seen him, IMO.

Vote- JDR

Battle closed, records updated.