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Goddamn, u ride this beat to perfection. The beat is killer, and ur flow glides along it with equally stellar delivery. However, lyrically, this isn't the best I've heard from you. It's not bad lyrically, but not the kinda lyrics I'm really gonna sink in to every time I listen to it. But I'd definitely sink into the rhythm in every listen. And that quality alone in this track makes it one of the most enjoyable new tracks I've heard in awhile.

This was dope. Your flow was the best part, you sounded so natural while rapping. Lyrics and delivery were dope also. I'd just turn the beat down or your vocals up cause they overshadowed your verse a bit.

Thanx for the feedback guys, yea I agree with u sentus, I heard it both ways on thru headphones and on speakers...In the headphones it sounds str8, but this beat has crazy bass so on the speakers it harder to hear but I don't def. see what ur talkn bout. Lol @ intrinsic, u could tell i was going for lyrical on here, and uve still have heard better from me lol, I like that, it's motivation, but I agree Im not sure if its the best delivery of lyrics that Im capable of but im glad its serviceable, def. can't wait for our drop, so hit me up wit it soon lol....

Good shit, "dumb down what, this a live in learn lesson", tight.

the echos u added in fit well considerin how you flowed over the beat.

Keep em comin playa

this shits str8 ill man... vocals a lil bit low... beats a tad loud... always wanna make the vocals even out with the beat... good shit tho man...

thnx for the advice man, I just re-mixed the song and put the vocals up higher so hopefully its leveled out, altho i wont be able to tell on speakers til l8tr cuz gf is sleep and i aint tryna wake her yet lol