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Now What
Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 11:54 am
by lyrical1
Re: Now What
Posted: Sat Dec 18, 2010 6:06 pm
by Alvin
The effects are a little ruff, but there is no denying your lyrics are pretty ill man. You have some good emotion, nice delivery... only thing is the audio quality. "living with conditions...." bars are fucking sick man. Nice display of talent. Just engineer it better man. Chibby
Re: Now What
Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2010 1:22 am
by lyrical1
yeah i know man, thx for the feeback though i gotta better digital studio now so im hopin the shit turns out more solid as far as the quality goes.
Re: Now What
Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2010 11:55 am
by Deciple
your becoming more and more of an ill artist the more i find your stuff.. you got some solid flow man, good lyrics also.. you can write well.. hook was wack with the effect you put on it IMO... just rap it and double it up that sound make a good hook... keep em coming
Re: Now What
Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 10:18 am
by lyrical1
^What!!!!!, u aint feelin the hook?!,...jk, I just did somerandom shit wit the hook. I kinda just wanted the vocal effect to be different cuz mean rapping the hook real intense aint sound so hot either.
Preciate the honest feedback though, I consider your sugestions. Ill be checkin more of ya tracks out, I just been too busy to stay on long and listen to cats joints.
Re: Now What
Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 12:13 pm
by Deciple
i got alot of them in the chamber... search them up
Re: Now What
Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 2:04 pm
by lyrical1
cool, ill check em out
Re: Now What
Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 2:42 pm
by Slicka
lyrics are nice flow is nice 2.......not feeling the chorus though.......shit wit betta quality your on your way
Re: Now What
Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2010 11:30 am
by lyrical1
thx for the props and feedback ^
Re: Now What
Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 2:11 pm
by 2xS
I Actually Thought The Opening Thing Was Kinda Old School Eminem-ish. Back In His LP Days Lol. Verses 1 Is Nice As Far As Delivery And Vocab. Dawg, I'ma Stop Mentioning That Cuz You Bring That Same Offer To The Table In Every Track. Chorus Sucks! LOL 2nd Verse Is Nicely Done, "Uncatalogued Syndromes, Etc" Nice Syllable Delivery And Vocab. "Furnace Cage, Murder Rage" Good Shit.This Chorus Is So Annoying. That Effect Sounds Like An Old Woman, Who's Been Smoking All Her Life, Has A RAspy Voice, And Is Using The PA At The Old Ghetto Free CLinic, Kinda Like Tha One In "Don't Be A Menace To South Central While Drinking Your Juice In The Hood" . Wow, That Was Long. Anyways, Another Nice Verse. You're Killin Shit Man, I Can't Wait Ta Hear New Material With Your Better Equipment
Re: Now What
Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 2:17 pm
by lyrical1
Its official, the hook is trash, lol. the effect bs was to be whateva i can always fix that though.
Preciate the fdbk for sure