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What do you think?
Posted: Fri Dec 24, 2010 5:53 am
by DaPoet
People change like time feel like a philosopher every time I rhyme/ The diamond in the rough waiting to get his shine/ Preaching like Mandela without a glass box haters throwing disses like mass rocks/ Haters saying it ain't my time like human clocks/ Rapping spiritual lyrics to my deathbed i'm addicted to this game like a methhead/ Feel the words Jesus said while breaking the bread/ Still contemplating words unsaid/ Screw this there's new land ready to tread/
Re: What do you think?
Posted: Fri Dec 24, 2010 8:40 am
by eMCee Havic
this was allright not that great, structure was fucked off
improve the structure improve the flow
peace
Re: What do you think?
Posted: Fri Dec 24, 2010 8:51 am
by FlipSide
u fucking suck... stop faking the funk... punk bitch
Re: What do you think?
Posted: Fri Dec 24, 2010 8:54 am
by Lawgix
FlipSide wrote:u fucking suck... stop faking the funk... punk bitch
damn speak it like it is... don't hold back anything Flip!
three words for ya tho bro.... Center Of Elevation
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/center-elevation.html