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Don't forget to vote on two battles and leave the links here, or state the threads you voted in, per the new rules....

Aight...

6 bars agreed upon...

Let's get it.

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/slick ... 20061.html
I also voted on the Topical Tournament Finals earlier today

It's official now. You finally accepted the call out fam, hopefully you will at least check in to this sometime soon so I can post my verse...

Okay I Voted, Here's A Check & My Post'll Be Up in a Few..

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/class ... 20171.html

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/slick ... ml#p161080

Creative's baby mama wrote:i am triedof being mad at youu i am tired of trying to replace you
i am tired of you not being there for nevaeh wat happened 2 us
we went from no one in da world but us to any one can tell u shit and ya blevie it
i wish u was her i wish u cared but u dont o now my heart is turned cold now
i want to hate u now i say bad things 2 u now i dont want u in nevaeh life because u dont

(I was thinking about re-writing it, cuz the it looked like stretched bars, but it went with the beat I wrote it to, so fuck it...)

Ayo...

Grand rapids flow, I get wild with the water, and this duke wants to hold everything in life higher than his daughter
Ay C, why don't we just keep it all in the family, after I son you, I can put in adoption papers so your child has a father!!!

Apparently you just a whore on weekends, you gettin shit on everywhere, here's the tour of feces
Only fucking thing Creative you've ever done is taking this pic to make people think you might actually be Puerto Rican!!!


In this match, I'll blaze you, eruptive lyrics fired up to enflame you, and I'd never pass the torch to some lame fool
Does anyone else see a fuckin problem with this dude wanting to battle a vet when it appears to me he's barely out of grade school???

Apparently it's cool with you, by baby mama's words, you still a tool, don't get all creative now and steal a tool
The only way you feeling shit around Illest is if we turn it upside down and shove it up this fag's ass, here Creative! Feel the stool!!!

PenDaGhost? Oh shit, bro, now I see why your lyrics are practically non-existant within the Illest deminsion
I see why you'd murder people after this, but you'll have to do more than make hits on Kellogg's employees if you gonna start cereal killin'!!!

You can feel the damage from guns, lyrical missiles sent to handle this punk, you can't dismantle this run
By the looks of shit in the room with you, and your clothes, I'm wondering if you're trying out for a part on Sanford and Son!!!!

Poor Kidd... When It Rains Bring an Umbrella

Voting & Balance? ILLER MODS Ain't Promotin' A Challenge
All We C is Notepads & 'Thoughtz' Provokin' The Silence !!

Here's Text 2 Service Ya Bars, Snatch Ya Breath Then Circle Ya Heart
We've Seen Murk's 'Capitals Murder' Facing A Grand Felony Charge !!

Pricks Annoying, Childish What He Does, Such A Liar He's A Writer? Yo Fam Resembles Rugg/Cory
Fuck A Pest, He's More A Dusty Bug & I'm Not Talkin' Bout The Glass in His AVY Peep His Ugly Mug !!

Nigga Chump Go Getta job, Steady Fry Cookin' Menu Logs
But Murk 'M-C' Nasty At Mc Donald's Drive Thru Intercoms !!

Throws A Punch & No 'Finish Lines', Better Jott 4 Sum Better Rhymes
But Please People, Tell Me How Da Fuck U 'C/See A Pic' if U Kuhlerblynd ?

I'll Leave Ya Soul Divorced, Smoke Ya Pores, Behind Enemy Lines There's No Remorse
Expose Ya Corpse, Leave Yuh Hoarse Kinda 'Like Ya Lines' Soundin' Only Forced !!

Fuckin' Joke

How do I see a pic? Well, you asked... I look at it. Kuhlerblynd people aren't completely blind, Creative. Lol. Good verse...


Open for votes!!!

if you want i can break this down but MVGT murk cat sweep

Grand rapids flow, I get wild with the water, and this duke wants to hold everything in life higher than his daughter
Ay C, why don't we just keep it all in the family, after I son you, I can put in adoption papers so your child has a father!!!
strong flow thats the kind of shit that hurts ooh burn
Apparently you just a whore on weekends, you gettin shit on everywhere, here's the tour of feces
Only fucking thing Creative you've ever done is taking this pic to make people think you might actually be Puerto Rican!!!
i like this bar it looks stretched but i tend write this way i would've left out "actually" but lol


In this match, I'll blaze you, eruptive lyrics fired up to enflame you, and I'd never pass the torch to some lame fool
Does anyone else see a fuckin problem with this dude wanting to battle a vet when it appears to me he's barely out of grade school???
blaze,erupt,enflame,torch like the wordplay and again lol
Apparently it's cool with you, by baby mama's words, you still a tool, don't get all creative now and steal a tool
The only way you feeling shit around Illest is if we turn it upside down and shove it up this fag's ass, here Creative! Feel the stool!!!
the flow is A1 but not feeling the bar itself
PenDaGhost? Oh shit, bro, now I see why your lyrics are practically non-existant within the Illest deminsion
I see why you'd murder people after this, but you'll have to do more than make hits on Kellogg's employees if you gonna start cereal killin'!!!
see now this is funny to me i grew up in pomona ca on kellogg park dr. and i also have been to the kellogg mansion and know that that mo'fo went crazy

You can feel the damage from guns, lyrical missiles sent to handle this punk, you can't dismantle this run
By the looks of shit in the room with you, and your clothes, I'm wondering if you're trying out for a part on Sanford and Son!!!!
again this is funny to me because i f'n love fred g sanford



Voting & Balance? ILLER MODS Ain't Promotin' A Challenge
All We C is Notepads & 'Thoughtz' Provokin' The Silence !!
sorry not feeling it nice flow til i try to figure how it rhymes
Here's Text 2 Service Ya Bars, Snatch Ya Breath Then Circle Ya Heart
We've Seen Murk's 'Capitals Murder' Facing A Grand Felony Charge !!
nice multis no content good flow punch meh

Pricks Annoying, Childish What He Does, Such A Liar He's A Writer? Yo Fam Resembles Rugg/Cory
Fuck A Pest, He's More A Dusty Bug & I'm Not Talkin' Bout The Glass in His AVY Peep His Ugly Mug !!
your best bars
Nigga Chump Go Getta job, Steady Fry Cookin' Menu Logs
But Murk 'M-C' Nasty At Mc Donald's Drive Thru Intercoms !!
meh not feeling it again flow is good
Throws A Punch & No 'Finish Lines', Better Jott 4 Sum Better Rhymes
But Please People, Tell Me How Da Fuck U 'C/See A Pic' if U Kuhlerblynd ?
read it over and over nothing stands out
I'll Leave Ya Soul Divorced, Smoke Ya Pores, Behind Enemy Lines There's No Remorse
Expose Ya Corpse, Leave Yuh Hoarse Kinda 'Like Ya Lines' Soundin' Only Forced !!
filler

my vote is the same x'cept i say they tied in the flow cat MVGT Murk

Yeah a Breakdown Would Be Nice.

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to me both verses were really good. like really hard to break this down my favorite part overall is below

Apparently you just a whore on weekends, you gettin shit on everywhere, here's the tour of feces
Only fucking thing Creative you've ever done is taking this pic to make people think you might actually be Puerto Rican!!!


vote-murk but barely could have went eitha way imo

Merk kicked it off nice. I liked the first bar. You don't always execute your punches to their fullest potential but you always have some great ideas. I thought this was a pretty decent verse from you.

Creative your set ups are crazy. If you're punches were half as good as your set ups you would have won. I didn't find them to be attacking Merk hard enough and they were a bit bland/reachy.

V/ Merk

Thread closed and records updated...

Murk wins KO.