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okay this is really poor quality drop dont know why im posting it there are only 2 verses the third verse is copy sloppily thrown in to cut the track not mixed recorded in my dining room the beat is courtesy of Daygo Mike im a lyricist thats it i am nearly always down to collab feed very welcome

oh yeah i'm Leeroi Green the undeniable last dragon, the peoples champ, Mo Shinobi, Mr. Vorhees the hockey mask and machete dude, Mr. continue to hold the title like he said he'd do, the rap rhinoseros, true hiphopapotumus and i'll always be SANDMAN SD CA and damn my boy DAGO CHILD on the hook

had to edit that was a weird snippet and i added a diff version of same song its wac but it'll give you insight into my world beat by curt p B.Billions on the hook

Ite, So Quality Wise, It Ain't The Best. . .But AT Tha Same Time, It Ain't Tha Worst. Good Emotion, Delivery Is Iffy. . .Sumtimes I Feel Like You STruggling To Get Some Out, And At The Same Time Is Sounds Good. . .Kinda Stuck In THa Middle On It. Sum Good Punches Too "Carry The World On My Back Like Atlas", Multi's Are Nice. Chorus Don't Even Sound Like A Singer. . .More Like A Gangster Tryinna Hold A Tune LOL. 2nd Verse Is Delivered Way Better IMO. When I Reached The Third Verse, I Cut Tha Song Off Simply Cuz It Was A Repeat. Overall, Good Track Tho. Yeah, Quality Is Clear As Far As Hearing And Understanding. The Only Thing I Cud Say Is MAybe Turn The Vocals Up A Bit, And Possibly Add Sum Support LAyers To It. Decent Listen Tho.

yeah man i dont engineer and thanks for the feed it was dropped in like twenty minutes x'cept and yeah loszy aint a singer like that lol but yeah i'm waiting to find a good producer s'why i say i collab any time

Ey man this was a good track, the flow was straight no doubt, and the lines with the multies were well written good job on that part as for the audio yeah man deffo needs vocals turning up n shit, but if you want i can engineer for you man, i am slowly learning how to make beats but i am no where near a produce but as far as mixing and mastering goes i can do that shit, and yeah the hook could have been better but ya know he did aiight no doubt so hit me up man

no doubt i got some beats but if i record it will sound like shit but next trip to SD i can drop crazy thanks for the feed im in here i think i got another version of the song on a flash drive but... well i might up it you'll hear from me

The beat is pretty sick... the flow was pretty nice.. i liked the hook except the extended words at the end of the bar... the effects are nice tho.. suited the track.. verses were good on point for the most part.. quality wasnt bad, vocals could go up a little.. i like your energy on here.. over all pretty good man.

Flow was on point, for sure. And I would say that's the most important part. Delivery was pretty good, too. Had plenty of emotion. Hook was ok. Did you post these lyrics in Written Rhymes a while back? They sound familiar. Anyway, good shit.

Yeah the hip hopapotumus verse I dont think the other verse ever leaked but rhanks for the feed all my shit sucks buyt I will post morr hate touch screen later

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i like this. multies on point dawg. ima eave it that yo. finish this ish. that beat is raW. keep elevating dawg.

this was ill lerree keep it up set more audios up was a hot drop

yo i really appreciate all the feed thanks nep thanks B thanks deciple and yo mutual i will def hit you up bout engineering i'll holla thanks

lyrics was cool beat was sick quality could be better but overall keep doing ya thing pretty soon you'll be at that spot you wanna be at fam
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Its all gravy, quality wise, we underground, if its audible, then your straight. Fuck always trying to sound like the radio. Your multies at the end of the first verse are the highlight for me. Shit, the end too, hip hop hippotomus lol. Kinda felt like the bigging were fillers for the fire u brought at the end. It'd be cool to see that fire all the way through, just my opinion though. Not a fan of theself boosting style of writing but u did a good job green.

Hey, PAY YOUR FEED FORWARD BASTARD: http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/tapes ... ml#p162007

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