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"Egos" (LivenLearn)
Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2011 11:37 pm
by Livenlearn
Re: "Egos" (LivenLearn)
Posted: Sat Jan 22, 2011 10:06 am
by Kau the Lion
You rode the beat perfectly. Flow was solid throughout. Hook was alright. Not sure the vibe fit with the lyrics but it was done well none the less. I like the content, too. Overall a nice piece.
Re: "Egos" (LivenLearn)
Posted: Sat Jan 22, 2011 8:23 pm
by Dynamiq
pretty good stuff,i felt the flow. lyrics didnt match the concept of the track that much to me. but it still kind of came together.
keep it up man.
Re: "Egos" (LivenLearn)
Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2011 1:40 am
by Livenlearn
Yea I def. feel what you are both saying in how content match the chorus, I think I had the idea that I was proven the track right but thru a contradiction of my own, sorta like the others have ego's, but I'm showing that have the same problem as I'm revealing that they do...I think I may have gotten off that path a lil maybe second verse or so, but I wrote this like a year ago was too lazy to fix so yea I agree with the feed, I appreciate the listen, def. glad for the feedback, and keep eye out for my other dropz...Also Dynamiq I might have collab for u and I so just keep ya eye for that...
Re: "Egos" (LivenLearn)
Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2011 1:59 am
by Audible Thought
Whats funny is im working on this same beat right now, flawless tracks have some sick beats lol.
Anyways i always like ur tracks, your flow and delivery is always on point. What you can work on like kau and joel said is your lyrical content. I know its hard to stay on topic for a whole song believe me, im working on the same shit.