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Ite, Last Track I'll Post Til My Mixtape Drops. This Is Once Again, A Bonez Production, And I'm Still On Standby About The Tags Bein Removed. Also Tried A Poetic-Rap Styled 2nd Verse. Enjoy!
[Hook]
Welcome To The Bridge, Take A Right Turn Shortly
To Hip Hop Avenue, The Home Of My Story
The Rise Of It’s Glory, We All Know Surely
The Sun Always Shines After It’s Stormy
Take A Left Turn On Rebirth Lane
Where The Music’s Coming Back Now In Full Swang
The Truth Is In The Booth And The Proof Remains
So Let’s Bring It To The Hood And Revive The Game

[Verse 1]
Turn The Track Up And Ride Wit Me
Just Find Yourself Lost Inside The Beat
When I Take Us On A Journey That’s Yearning For Us To Grow
And Bridge The Gap Between The Music And People’s Soul
From My Heart To The Pen, The Pen To The Page
Listen And Gaze As I Enter The Stage
Where The Music Takes Over, And The World Is Stopped
Cuz That’s The Kinda Passion That The World Forgot
Ever Since Rap Started To Fade. . .I Stepped Back A Notch. . .
Sat Back And Watched. . .Counting Off The Days Til I Set Back The Clock
Now The Hour Is At Hand, Let’s Get Back To Thought
Turn This Up Now The Kids Need To Hear It
Cuz It Could Change Their Life If They Listen To The Lyrics
Find It In Their Spirits, Make Em Do A Switch
I Know This Is The Chorus, But Let’s Take Em To The Bridge

[Hook]
Welcome To The Bridge, Take A Right Turn Shortly
To Hip Hop Avenue, The Home Of My Story
The Rise Of It’s Glory, We All Know Surely
The Sun Always Shines After It’s Stormy
Take A Left Turn On Rebirth Lane
Where The Music’s Coming Back Now In Full Swang
The Truth Is In The Booth And The Proof Remains
So Let’s Bring It To The Hood And Revive The Game

[Verse 2]
Listen. . .Cuz The World Is The Kind Of Place That’s Like A Race
And It’s Hard For People To Find A Pace. .They’re Lost, Looking For A Sign Of Grace
That’s Designed To Shape Their Hopes Into A Shining Fate
Their Far From The Final Gate. . .So The Bridge To The Music
Is The Last Chance Of Redemption Depending If They Use It
And People Don’t Want To Lose It, But They’re Choosing To Abuse It
With the Influence Of Songs Now Telling Them Which Shoes Fit
But Walk A Mile In Them And See They Fall Apart
Cuz Songs Are Art. . .Painted From The Strongest Heart
With Happiness, Pain, Struggles, Depicting The Portrait
But The Picture Is Corporate
And To Try And Tear Them Apart Is Like Evicting A Fortress
And Sure It’s All About Money And Fame And Becoming A Name
But Strip Away Those Features And See That Dummies Remain
To Some It’s Insane, And To Some It’s Everything
But I’ll Stand In Every Ring, With A Mic And Forever Sing
Til The Lights Shut Off Or Until My Breath Stops… .
But Then I’ll Breathe In some Fresh Air
Grab My Own Shoes A Fresh Pair
And Walk Across That Bridge Alone. . Hoping To See You There

[Hook]
Welcome To The Bridge, Take A Right Turn Shortly
To Hip Hop Avenue, The Home Of My Story
The Rise Of It’s Glory, We All Know Surely
The Sun Always Shines After It’s Stormy
Take A Left Turn On Rebirth Lane
Where The Music’s Coming Back Now In Full Swang
The Truth Is In The Booth And The Proof Remains
So Let’s Bring It To The Hood And Revive The Game

I Liked This Man The Second Verse Sounded More Like A Spoken Word But Was Still Hot And Fitted The Song Nicely Just One Thing Though I Think The Hook Is Nice Just Woud Of Sounded Beter With A Different Person On It

lol I like that last line in the first real classic man, the first verse a lil to stagnant I needed some drops or stretched words, pretty much a switchup...your lyrics and message I love like that's exactly what i love rapping about...Your imagery is nice too man its def. shows ya creativity and thought man, def. can't wait to wrk wit ya....

@ Orfadox. . .Thanks For Listening! Idk Bout Finding Someone Else To Do The Hook, But I Kinda Get What You're SAying. Yeah, It's A Form Of Spoken Word, But It Leans More Towards Poetry Than Actual Spoken Words. Idk, Ask Punchd About It, That's How He Explained It To Me Lol

@ LivenLearn. . .Thanks For The Feed, And Yes, It Could Have Used A Switch Up From Another Person's Perspective, But I Just Couldnt Feel It In My Own Sense Ya Know? Good Looks Tho, And Jus Message Me And Stuff K?

@ Mesar. . .Thanks For Listening, And The Second Verse Is Supposed To Sound Like That. It's A Form Of Hip Hop Called "Spoken Word", But Mine Was More Influenced By Poetry Than Spoken Word. Youtube It Man, It's Really Good Lol Thanks For The Feed

Deep feel playa, i'm feelin this son, good shit 2xS

Been a min since i been on, work and probation keepin me busy as hell

This was amazing man, can't wait for the mixtape

yea i liked this shit , chorus was sick verse was delivered good... like the beat a lot. chorus was a lil long tho.. but keep doing ya thing man