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deception, what is deception?,
decieving an illusory feat,
only defeated by my perception,
and williness to be discrete,
to counter-act all the lies,
hoping to bring rest to my soul,
releasing sites seen by these eyes,
creating my being into a tottem pole,

Deception, who is deception?,
my mask to release my troubles,
a empty soul looking for redemption,
on a path that staggers and stumbles,
the most humble looking for righteousness,
just to bestow honour upon his family,
even if one suffers enternal tourcher and agony,


fed on IC and another persons poem

Cool, cool, bruh. You know where you're going with it, it seems. The only thing I'd watch is spelling, bruh. But shit, do what ya do, dude.

Seemed like a defiant way of poetically expressing the definition of the word deception.

AWESOME

Yo deception this is purdy tight man, got nothing constructive to give you so I will just say I enjoyed the read.

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it was expressed good props. it was top notch enjoyable