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Probably going to add some adlibs and some minor adjustments but i gotta go to work soon so i can't now, tell me what ya think.

Lyrics:

man i cant hear shit turn it up turn it up
audible bout to spit turn it up turn it up
if you wanna hear this turn it up turn it up
this is real hip hop turnin back the clocks[x2]

Y'all thought that i was gone, well y'all thought wrong
im stronger than ever and now im ready to charge
and bombard the charts shatter the mic into shards
burn up anything thats in my way including the law
never underestimate my strength cuz im a nice guy
beneath the surface im a beast big and ready to die
trynna get by, if you impede the process
i guarantee you'll be feelin more than nauseous
just a precaution im not sick im deadly
always rambo when i spit never am i stealthy
never am i healthy this is hip hop on steroids
a one man army "AUDIBLE THOUGHT" like leroy
scream my name, as i rush into this game
a russian mother fucker who be rupturin some brains
metaphorically an AK, hitting with force
hand on my nuts fuck the world no remorse

[CHORUS]

if you really don't like this boom bap style
ill tie you up then release you back in the wild
so you can learn where this came from
the roots anthem fist in the air and the other on a handgun
freedom fighter writing fire no lying
im flyiing off of the wire to send this letter to tyrants
and tell em revolution's comin in the form of my rhyming
im bringing a steady dose of mathematics and science
i ain't the flyest, emcee but a king of the seas
controllin current flows doper than a handful of amphetamines
now what you telling me, is what they telling you
and i got proof it ain't the truth, so back off
talk the talk but dont walk where the real are
we hungry like sharks and spit with a sharp jaw
rolling stones making smash hits like guitars
in this deeper than rap hustlin like rick ross

Shit was sick dude, especially the second verse. You really rode the beat on the second one I felt like I was listening to Common or Luda for a second. I felt like you should have played the chorus one more time and then went out. That's just my opinion. It's your artwork at the end of the day. But that aside this one is solid. Is that your beat though?

Man this is nice music. Real laid back. It sounded like you were louder in the left side than the right. Your not coming down the center basically. It was a nice joint all together. Further mixing is required, but after work i guess lol. Dope drop though "Leroy" lol. Greens gonna take it as if your talking about him lol.

You are one of my fav rappers from Illest.. you got some solid lyrics and flow and got the whole package.. All around rapper.. you got good taste in beats also... I feeling all your beats man..
Adlips and effects maybe doubling up on the hook would make it stand out more.. its catchy tho.. Turn it up Turn it up haha.. 9/10 here bro..