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5 Bars is Grace, due Sunday by 11:00 pm.

Anything else feel free to add.. this is my check BTW

Check...

-- Sun Feb 13, 2011 11:58 pm --

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/nep-d ... ml#p162995
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/nep-d ... ml#p162996



NoVeL is formerly Cre@t!ve


The actions he make kind of baffle the brain. Is he mad or insane? Well, he’s actaully lame.
It was a novel idea to retract your old name, now you’re not creative; So that’s still the same.

I see him in the shoutbox, dude can talk smack. But ability lacks, so you should stop that.
Shut your stupid cock trap. Luckily, Quix found a creative means to a human Jock strap.

Against vets his meek features seem meager, Then that means he ain’t fucking with me either.
This is a weak fever versus a heat creature, So I’ll tear through this novel like a speed reader.

Ask him to mention his tactics? Depressing. He’ll lack in defenses, I’m smashing his head in.
And I ain’t one to judge a book by it’s cover but the “front” on this novel is just sad and distressing.

So, I’ll give this joke some cash to borrow, Psyche! Load the magazine, laugh and throttle,
Take my paper back, blast and mottle his ass with hollows, Turn this comic into graphic novel!

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/nep-d ... ml#p163024

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/sacre ... ml#p163025

Besides I Didn't Know Kau Was Pronounced Crow.
Why Didn't You Name Yourself Crow Tricky Bastard!!

I'm killin' this Kau effin' ya pen skills, receive death and immense guilt cuz ammo's 'lead' from a pencil.
pluckin' feathers for quill, well seasoned like perdue, crew Collectively ILL due to "outbreak of Bird Flu".

I heard too, Kau's propping and fronts so I watched em for months and learned his 'covers' practically laminated.
He's a character himself C sevenhertz.net, no one follows his 'nerdy threats' less' they're graphically animated.

http://www.sevenhertz.net

Can't even say it, but dude's a geek. and prolly gay, him & his user peeps.
Ya crew is weak, who knew a shirtless 'bra/bruh' could have Boobs indeed

Kau has no art, I'll 'wiz' on this 'cowardly lion' with no heart. My punches'll connect till he blows hard.
Think it's a game? I'll beat him senseless in a Fatal Fury you'll be a slow tart, fake ass "Terry Bogard".



I'll wreck his sonar wit a chrome bar leaving him 'flat topped' like a grommet.
Collectively ILL? yeah this "Lion's" a 'sick fart' well known for that Narnia vomit!!

-- Tue Feb 15, 2011 3:41 pm --

If it isn't too late can we also add no crew votes. Reason being I know how this can get.

The actions he make kind of baffle the brain. Is he mad or insane? Well, he’s actaully lame.
It was a novel idea to retract your old name, now you’re not creative; So that’s still the same.

UHM, not bad .. seems like a lot of filler in there tho.

I see him in the shoutbox, dude can talk smack. But ability lacks, so you should stop that.
Shut your stupid cock trap. Luckily, Quix found a creative means to a human Jock strap.

hmm, i take u implying he on my nuts. lol not bad again


Against vets his meek features seem meager, Then that means he ain’t fucking with me either.
This is a weak fever versus a heat creature, So I’ll tear through this novel like a speed reader.

not feeling this...too obvious

Ask him to mention his tactics? Depressing. He’ll lack in defenses, I’m smashing his head in.
And I ain’t one to judge a book by it’s cover but the “front” on this novel is just sad and distressing.

i liked this one, flow was nice etc

So, I’ll give this joke some cash to borrow, Psyche! Load the magazine, laugh and throttle,
Take my paper back, blast and mottle his ass with hollows, Turn this comic into graphic novel

nice visual ... buuuut what the fuck is up with those multies??? throttle, mottle??? made up and forced .. bad closer




Novel

I'm killin' this Kau effin' ya pen skills, receive death and immense guilt cuz ammo's 'lead' from a pencil.
pluckin' feathers for quill, well seasoned like perdue, crew Collectively ILL due to "outbreak of Bird Flu".

umm, no this was not good!

I heard too, Kau's propping and fronts so I watched em for months and learned his 'covers' practically laminated.
He's a character himself C sevenhertz.net, no one follows his 'nerdy threats' less' they're graphically animated.

this wasn't too bad ... kind of liked it.

http://www.sevenhertz.net

Can't even say it, but dude's a geek. and prolly gay, him & his user peeps.
Ya crew is weak, who knew a shirtless 'bra/bruh' could have Boobs indeed

lmfao


Kau has no art, I'll 'wiz' on this 'cowardly lion' with no heart. My punches'll connect till he blows hard.
Think it's a game? I'll beat him senseless in a Fatal Fury you'll be a slow tart, fake ass "Terry Bogard

not feeling this either

I'll wreck his sonar wit a chrome bar leaving him 'flat topped' like a grommet.
Collectively ILL? yeah this "Lion's" a 'sick fart' well known for that Narnia vomit!!

haha ... decent lmfao!



overall: Weak battle from both of you, seen both you guys come much harder, more personal and more creative.\


Cats are tied ... come down to enjoyment ... and i'm going to go with Novel, his shit made me laugh and had a bit more creativity to his verse.



MVGT: Novel

yo kau came with it

-flow- Tie
punches- the lion
-personals- tie
-enjoyment- the lion
-multis- the lion
-metas-the lion

-overall vote KAu the lion

Just came harder i was feeling his structure, flow and punches way more than novel

but good battle none the less

1-0 kau the lion
UPPING

Punches 1
Personals/Name flip 1
Flow 1
Wordplay 1
Multi's 1
total=5
Kau

The actions he make kind of baffle the brain. Is he mad or insane? Well, he’s actaully lame.
It was a novel idea to retract your old name, now you’re not creative; So that’s still the same.
set up is kinda weak, punch is ok. 3.5/5
I see him in the shoutbox, dude can talk smack. But ability lacks, so you should stop that.
Shut your stupid cock trap. Luckily, Quix found a creative means to a human Jock strap.
at first i thought wording could be better, but then remembered creative is his name, punch is nice lol. 4/5
Against vets his meek features seem meager, Then that means he ain’t fucking with me either.
This is a weak fever versus a heat creature, So I’ll tear through this novel like a speed reader.
Shits nice man, 5/5
Ask him to mention his tactics? Depressing. He’ll lack in defenses, I’m smashing his head in.
And I ain’t one to judge a book by it’s cover but the “front” on this novel is just sad and distressing.
This bar kinda fell short man. set up was good, but i lost the flow, multis, and that weakens the punch. 2.5/5
So, I’ll give this joke some cash to borrow, Psyche! Load the magazine, laugh and throttle,
Take my paper back, blast and mottle his ass with hollows, Turn this comic into graphic novel!
Chuckled, nice closer, but im not a fan of gun drops. Nice for the set up though. 4/5

total 19

Novel

I'm killin' this Kau effin' ya pen skills, receive death and immense guilt cuz ammo's 'lead' from a pencil.
pluckin' feathers for quill, well seasoned like perdue, crew Collectively ILL due to "outbreak of Bird Flu".
I dont get it... But i can see nice wordplay and rhyme scheme, 2/5
I heard too, Kau's propping and fronts so I watched em for months and learned his 'covers' practically laminated.
He's a character himself C sevenhertz.net, no one follows his 'nerdy threats' less' they're graphically animated.
lol, i had to play with the site a bit to connect the dots. lol. Pretty good. 3.5/5
Can't even say it, but dude's a geek. and prolly gay, him & his user peeps.
Ya crew is weak, who knew a shirtless 'bra/bruh' could have Boobs indeed
hahahaha, i laughed, like really i did. If the vocab would have been up to score you multies, would have been 5/5, but its 4.5/5
Kau has no art, I'll 'wiz' on this 'cowardly lion' with no heart. My punches'll connect till he blows hard.
Think it's a game? I'll beat him senseless in a Fatal Fury you'll be a slow tart, fake ass "Terry Bogard".
flow just fell off, but fucking funny. 4/5
I'll wreck his sonar wit a chrome bar leaving him 'flat topped' like a grommet.
Collectively ILL? yeah this "Lion's" a 'sick fart' well known for that Narnia vomit!!
I felt the final punch could have come harder, but good closer, 4.5/5

total 18.5

Good battle you guys, but a loser must be chosen. MVGT Kau, by a slight edge.

^^ so you gave him a 4/5 on a bar where he mentioned another rapper ... and also using the "cock trap" to rhyme with "stop that" lmfao .... wow is that forced and dumb!
and mentioneing my name ... that had nothing to do with this battle and really has to impact on your opponent. just seems a little weired seeing as how i am not part of this battle ... it could be called filler by most. anyways


both could have and should have come a lot better!

^^ so you gave him a 4/5 on a bar where he mentioned another rapper ... and also using the "cock trap" to rhyme with "stop that" lmfao .... wow is that forced and dumb!

Really.... ok.
Multi: "Jock strap,cock trap,talk smack,stop that.", to me thats pretty good attempt at multis, so I gave him a 1.
Flow: "I see him in the shoutbox, dude can talk smack. But ability lacks, so you should stop that.
Shut your stupid cock trap. Luckily, Quix found a creative means to a human Jock strap." < reads with perfect flow. 1.
Punch: At first like i said, i thought if worded better, it ould be solid, but then i remembered his name is creative, so i gave him a 1 because the name flip helped the punch. Whether their is truth behind him on your nuts or not, your name is irrelevant to me, he simply said creative is better used as a jock strap for another artist than what he claims about himself..
Personal/Nameflip: He flipped creative and talked about him personally about the shoutbox. 2 refrences that standalone would count as .5, together, equal 1

By my calculations thats 4. Why you buggin?

ahH, i don't really care. It just seems that 2 word multies get the same respect that a 5 or 6 syllable multie does. What woould you have given someone who absolutley ripped it with more complexed multies?? A 1 also?? I really honestly could care less who wins this battle ... just not the biggest fan of the voting system.



its nothing personal Punch or Kau ... actually i really never liked Creative ... so its not like he's my hommie or nothing. Just trying to keep it 100 ya dig?

No problem for me. I respect everyone's opinions and voting system. Generally people will vote for who they think won and make a system that shows what they want or what they believe. In the end it's an opinion either way. You can't apply objective scrutiny to it.

yo kau came with it

-flow- Tie
punches- the lion
-personals- tie
-enjoyment- the lion
-multis- the lion
-metas-the lion

-overall vote KAu the lion

Just came harder i was feeling his structure, flow and punches way more than novel

but good battle none the less

1-0 kau the lion
UPPING

Kinda hard to believe no named emcees with little or less posts, come to a battle and vote against someone with such emphasis and no breakdown. 4 Reasons like this I'll stop battling, a little skeptical especially with all the duplicate fake accounts. If it's too much to ask can I get a breakdown?? He's probably Cory in another shell cuz I'm sure his IP matches the same.