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Unfinished but Feel free to feed peepz

If Reached to a point of no return/
You should win the race like sperm/
or lose and be used as bait worm and don't get burned by your mistake stand up firm/ think about what you can learn/
earn your respect in deez streetz/ you don't get away frm the heat/
qz kids getting chased as we TYPE or speak/
dying the were lying, where they eat, drink and sleep/ shit is deep
never trouble trouble till trouble troubles you/
or you might end up in double trouble/
gettin popped like some Hubble Bubbles/
Bulletz come in married couples like labo labo (means two two's)
watch your words as if you playing scrubble
don't let me clone your ass and fuck your own double

Not bad man keep posting though, i wouldnt mind hearing something recorded. This verse would sound pretty nice to a smooth instrumental. I can sorta imagine it. Mite wanna feed two links b4 posting though. This mite get locked

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never trouble trouble till trouble troubles you/
or you might end up in double trouble/
gettin popped like some Hubble Bubbles/
Bulletz come in married couples like labo labo

That was pretty clean, in my opinion.

Thanks Bro is not finished yet but i'm working to add some stuff to it