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INCREDABLE, FLEXABLE, DISCHARGE! AS PROPANE
TANKS COVER THE FLOORING IN YOUR BACKYARD
KILL HUMANS AND DEVOUR THIER FLESH
SPILL BLOOD, WIPE IT ALL OVER MY CHEST
GET HIGH WITH THE PRINCE OF THE SKY
MAKE A MESS OF YA LIFE
EAT EYES TO TAKE SIGHT, OWNS THE NIGHT AND
BARES LIGHT, I TEAR
MUTHAFUCKAZ APART IN A FIST FIGHT
THERE'S NO TIME LEFT, YOUR TOO LATE
READING YOU YOUR LAST RIGHTS
AND DEATH IS ON THE WAY
DECAPATATED HEADS AND COMPRESSED BRAINS
THE TRUTH IS SOO REAL THAT
ITS TO FAKE FOR THE AIR WAVES
CATACOMBS AND CAVES
HOMOSEXUALS WRITE GAY POEMS
AS I KEEP IT REAL KIKIN IT WITH ALL
MY HOMIES AND BLAZE
LIVING OUT ALL OF OUR LAST DAYZ
UNTILL WE REACH THE END OF THE GAME
AND CANT PLAY
CONSIDER ME A CHILD CUZ I LUV 2 PLAY
SHOOT AN A.K.

-HOOK-

YOU CAN TALK THE TALK, BUT
CAN YOU WALK THE WALK?
SOME NIGGAZ ARE REAL AND
SOME NIGGAZ ARE NOT
YOU CAN TALK THE TALK, BUT
CAN YOU WALK THE WALK?
SOME NIGGAZ ARE REAL AND
SOME NIGGAZ ARE NOT

I read. Not impressed to be honest. The capital lettering method is meant for delivery, so im trying to be all aggressive with every word i read, for example: here is MY example, OKAY! anyways, i believe cussing is a lack of intelligence, but that's just me personally. Try adding some length to your bars. Welcome

damn take it easy on newcomers help them elevate ....you don't have to be nice...but you dont have to be a complete dick

I always like to see someone talkin that wicked shit. If it suits you, bruh, go for it. Just try to make sure you don't stray too far off topic and if possible to beef your bars up a bit so they carry more weight. The fact is you showed initiative to sit and write and post, that's all you need to progress. Stay up, bruh.

Yo, thakns for the posts every1. Thats real cool. That keystyle come a recorded written i made and wanted to see what ppl would say.