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Lawgix - Hip-Hop

Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2006 3:32 pm
by complexity
Lawgix

theres a war goin on, in quiet homes
buildings explode, with tempers flarin from parents and folks

suburbian homes, get interupted when words float
when kids are cussin their dads or moms, leavin em notes

to let them know how they feel
expression thru music, is what they know

either its metal, rap or emotional tones
that gets flowin thru the veins of kids sittin alone

in a dark room, blarin their head phones
their ears are droned to sound of music, to make em feel at home

when they feel alone, like nobody cares
or dares to step inside their rooms, like their prayin a silent prayer

as they sit on their bed, lookin at the wall with an empty stare
so they dress like the bands, paint their face, and do up their hair

so this is just an expression, this is the generation
let us hold up our signs up, and be with the music were facin

Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 1:32 am
by Invincible
Lawgix your verse was awesome. Great detail. Complex, you got off topic.

Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 5:34 am
by Lawgix
thanx appreciate it man

Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 6:29 am
by complexity
Thats why I said it in the first bar. I told him I couldn't rap about what he wanted to
none the less the verse was horrible

Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 10:49 am
by Lawgix
well if theres a next time i'll let u pick the topic plex

Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 11:15 am
by complexity
We can do one tonight if you want

Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 11:17 am
by drunken jesus
did you delete my post on this cause i said lawgix verse sucked? i remember posting in this thread

Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 11:26 am
by complexity
Don't think so...

Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 3:51 am
by Onediversekid
Word I Didn't Like The Kids Verse At All ..2 thumbs down !

Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 12:18 pm
by Young Dank
well it was a nice verse for a poem because of the detailed but stretched lines...but his rap was thorough all the way through

Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2006 11:37 pm
by ~Symbolikull~
yeah it was a real verse, lyrically it may not of been the best of verses but he told a true story wit this, big ups homie keep it up ~21~