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The only thing that hurts is the thought of emotions,
People talk behind your back until you catch the commotion/
Your thoughts have been broken, words in your head have been spoken, so you look back at the days that everyone was jokin/
And smiling, now you sittin back tryin not to cry, wishin everything around was gone and everyone would die/
Why? Did god make life for you to kill it over lies or did he make us so we believe in ourselves and give it more tries/
I despise people who talk shit to get attention not to mention day by day people bullied and THOSE kids get detention/
Its senseless how these kids could be so relentless,
Breaking news high school kids plot to commence hit lists/
What is this? What kind of world are we living in,
To throw the towel, grab the guns and start giving in/
Columbine, red lake for gods sake these are schools,
People bully kids because they're thinkin its cool but really they're fools/
I was bullied my high school year,
I always thought about suicide, my end is near, but I'm here/

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yo! im diggn the flow and content..
i can relate to what u are saying on this.
i think u can be more creative and complex but
prolly just sayin cuz i aint here u spit it..
the way u spit prolly sound dope as fuck...
good drop..
keep spittin like camels.
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nice dude remind of some stuff i be writing.. cool

Not bad for a beginner(I'm assuming), the structure was a lil' off, rhymes were pretty basic but I'm feelin' the message you're getting across, stay at it.

Thanks

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