my very first attempt (at a love or female directed track)
Posted: Sun Mar 06, 2011 1:59 pm
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/this- ... 20841.html
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To tell you the truth I never thought this would happen-(spoken intro)
Between me and you,I never thought this WOULD HAPPEN//
........True Love,with a hint of THUG PASSION//
and even though I've thought about it,this is more then I IMAGINED//
so now I'm here with you,...wondering what the CATCH IS//
..........its almost like its MAGIC,....I know you FEEL IT//
and I don't have to say that your 1 in a MILLION//
for you to understand I find you more then just APPEALING//
...which is why when we kiss ,...my head hits the CEILING//
and the world shuts its lips,like MAFIA-SICILIAN//
so Let's go ahead and live,yeah just live to be LIVING//
in a moment made to MENTION,I wouldn't want it any DIF-RENT//-different
so keep it coming with the luvin,girl I love it when it SIMMERS//
your the sugar to my cinnamon-the summer to my WINTER//
the meaning in my words,or the win in my WINNER//
....my everything my all,this is just the BEGINNING//
we where meant to be involved,so let our fates...REVEAL IT//16
Did you know my spirit soars,everytime we EMBRACE?//
and I can't help but smile when I see your pretty FACE?//
girl I love the way you smell,....I love the way you TASTE//
and I love the way you feel,...in every single...WAY//
see I love it when you SAY,all those things that you SAY//
how you whisper in my ear,...and SAY you wanna "PLAY"//
or when you grab me by the hand,at any moment in the DAY//
I know this aint the greatest I wrote it months back.Can I get some feed on it as far as my apporach and what not....also I only got 8 bars into the second verse back when I was writing it and although I don't feel compelled to write anymore onto this because I believe my skill level has since exceeded it ...any good feed will be applied to my next attempt
-- Sat Mar 05, 2011 10:01 pm --
now that I read this on the screen this is probably the worst peice Ive ever posted on this site
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/quick ... 20854.html
To tell you the truth I never thought this would happen-(spoken intro)
Between me and you,I never thought this WOULD HAPPEN//
........True Love,with a hint of THUG PASSION//
and even though I've thought about it,this is more then I IMAGINED//
so now I'm here with you,...wondering what the CATCH IS//
..........its almost like its MAGIC,....I know you FEEL IT//
and I don't have to say that your 1 in a MILLION//
for you to understand I find you more then just APPEALING//
...which is why when we kiss ,...my head hits the CEILING//
and the world shuts its lips,like MAFIA-SICILIAN//
so Let's go ahead and live,yeah just live to be LIVING//
in a moment made to MENTION,I wouldn't want it any DIF-RENT//-different
so keep it coming with the luvin,girl I love it when it SIMMERS//
your the sugar to my cinnamon-the summer to my WINTER//
the meaning in my words,or the win in my WINNER//
....my everything my all,this is just the BEGINNING//
we where meant to be involved,so let our fates...REVEAL IT//16
Did you know my spirit soars,everytime we EMBRACE?//
and I can't help but smile when I see your pretty FACE?//
girl I love the way you smell,....I love the way you TASTE//
and I love the way you feel,...in every single...WAY//
see I love it when you SAY,all those things that you SAY//
how you whisper in my ear,...and SAY you wanna "PLAY"//
or when you grab me by the hand,at any moment in the DAY//
I know this aint the greatest I wrote it months back.Can I get some feed on it as far as my apporach and what not....also I only got 8 bars into the second verse back when I was writing it and although I don't feel compelled to write anymore onto this because I believe my skill level has since exceeded it ...any good feed will be applied to my next attempt
-- Sat Mar 05, 2011 10:01 pm --
now that I read this on the screen this is probably the worst peice Ive ever posted on this site
