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This is a piece of mine entitled The Descent.
I went Acapella because That's how I felt it.
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/inner ... 20819.html

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/inten ... 20796.html

very nice piece i think anyone out there can relate to that also you have a very good flow i can wait to here more from you bravo

this was a nice piece.. liked the lyrics and the rhymes were pretty decent... when you put this to the beat, unless you wrapped the beat around the tracks, its gonna throw your flow off if you dont breathe more often then you did, but other then that, this was a pretty good piece

Not a bad piece man, Im feeln it, the lyrics are def. wat gripped me, although I think more inflection and emphasis on certain words would help..Not a bad drop tho, I can see u have a visionary style of writing