Test Battle: Elite Punisher vs. 32 Neilz
Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2011 7:25 am
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Test Battle: Elite Punisher vs. 32 Neilz
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Re: Elite Punisher vs. 32 Neilz
Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2011 10:29 am
Scott James vs jack da rippa
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Re: Elite Punisher vs. 32 Neilz
Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2011 12:33 pm
YO I Expire Neilz, & Drive him through A Pile Of Nails...//
My Rhymes SHAPE up The FRAIL...//
Neilz ill Have You Wearing 32 Like O'neilz (O-Neal) Use To Do
Ill shatter Fractions And Portions Of Your Whole Crew//
When Im Busting Caps-Its ME Busting Through You're CRANIUM CAP//
Im Emitted To SOLVE the Facts//
Ill KIll you Before You Start Your Emmy-Career Like NEIL(Z)-Patrick Harris//
You PROTRUDE Like You Turned Around Embarrassed //
You SCARED like you eloped in the wrong Marriage
ill HAVE you Steaming like I ENGULFED with volcanic ASH//
Your Only Engulfed With the Ghost-of-Christmas-Past//
All the Properties Of Gas, Assemble 'Clouds Of dust Surround Your Ass'//
VOTE!!!!
My Rhymes SHAPE up The FRAIL...//
Neilz ill Have You Wearing 32 Like O'neilz (O-Neal) Use To Do
Ill shatter Fractions And Portions Of Your Whole Crew//
When Im Busting Caps-Its ME Busting Through You're CRANIUM CAP//
Im Emitted To SOLVE the Facts//
Ill KIll you Before You Start Your Emmy-Career Like NEIL(Z)-Patrick Harris//
You PROTRUDE Like You Turned Around Embarrassed //
You SCARED like you eloped in the wrong Marriage
ill HAVE you Steaming like I ENGULFED with volcanic ASH//
Your Only Engulfed With the Ghost-of-Christmas-Past//
All the Properties Of Gas, Assemble 'Clouds Of dust Surround Your Ass'//
VOTE!!!!
Re: Elite Punisher vs. 32 Neilz
Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2011 5:09 pm
Yo, all relax and take a SEAT, watch as ELITE gets BEAT, he can't COMPETE, I'll leave him OBSOLETE/
Neilz never FAILS, barz hard like a hammer, I smash the bed of NAILS, flying pirate SAILS/
I'm redefining rap like a REBEL, I'm on another LEVEL, PUNISHER I'll PUNISH YA, grab a 15 inch blade and RUN AT YA/
I got a million diffrent PUNCHLINES, I'll strip ELITE for he's money like a bully when it's LUNCHTIME/
Yo EP u FEELING ME as I write these words of WIZARDRY, sick barz always IGNITE IN ME, only way u could win is if u were BITING ME/
I'm raps evil line LURKER, u better take cover like a Muslim bitch in a BURKA, believe that I will HURT YA/
One last little detail before I end this FIGHT, u should know I rep the uk and that I'm WHITE//
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Neilz never FAILS, barz hard like a hammer, I smash the bed of NAILS, flying pirate SAILS/
I'm redefining rap like a REBEL, I'm on another LEVEL, PUNISHER I'll PUNISH YA, grab a 15 inch blade and RUN AT YA/
I got a million diffrent PUNCHLINES, I'll strip ELITE for he's money like a bully when it's LUNCHTIME/
Yo EP u FEELING ME as I write these words of WIZARDRY, sick barz always IGNITE IN ME, only way u could win is if u were BITING ME/
I'm raps evil line LURKER, u better take cover like a Muslim bitch in a BURKA, believe that I will HURT YA/
One last little detail before I end this FIGHT, u should know I rep the uk and that I'm WHITE//
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Re: Elite Punisher vs. 32 Neilz
Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2011 11:43 pm
Yo no-one voting?
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Re: Elite Punisher vs. 32 Neilz
Posted: Mon Mar 14, 2011 12:25 am
Pretty weak battle overall. No real "ooooh" punchlines, know what I mean. Actually, after reading it again, no punchlines at all.
Punches: ---
Wordplay: ---
Nameplay: Elite (though, they were all weak.)
Personals: ---
Mulites: 32neilz
Flow: 32neilz
I'm gonna give my vote to 32neilz just for having a smoother flow which made for a more enjoyable read. Neither verse caught my attention with any punchlines. You guys should read back through the closed battles for reference. Or check out the open battle between Scott and Jack.
+1 32neilz
Punches: ---
Wordplay: ---
Nameplay: Elite (though, they were all weak.)
Personals: ---
Mulites: 32neilz
Flow: 32neilz
I'm gonna give my vote to 32neilz just for having a smoother flow which made for a more enjoyable read. Neither verse caught my attention with any punchlines. You guys should read back through the closed battles for reference. Or check out the open battle between Scott and Jack.
+1 32neilz
Re: Test Battle: Elite Punisher vs. 32 Neilz
Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2011 12:29 pm
this battle was ok...nothing really personal...I'm gonna say neilz got this because he had a better flow and a better attempt with the multies...and for punisher rellik was right about missing your set ups on the neil patrick harris line and the shaq line could have been done better
Punches: 32Neilz (it was weak but the lunchline line)
Wordplay: na
Nameplay: Elite
Personals: na
Mulites: 32Neilz
Flow: 32Neilz
Punches: 32Neilz (it was weak but the lunchline line)
Wordplay: na
Nameplay: Elite
Personals: na
Mulites: 32Neilz
Flow: 32Neilz
Re: Test Battle: Elite Punisher vs. 32 Neilz
Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2011 4:18 pm
3-0
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