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5 barz
due date no later than next Sunday.
You first bro

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-- Thu Mar 17, 2011 4:38 am --

Fuck it I'll go first!

I'm sick with the flow, life is really PEACHY, now watch as I disintegrate YOUNG MEECHIE, I know it all- no way that u can TEACH ME/
U get a CRITICAL HIT, dropped in a PIT, when I spit this hyper LYRICAL SHIT, u shook like an epileptic during a FIT/
I should be a supreme lyricist like mcnasty, yezzir and drunken JESUS, top meechie and stash him in FREEZERS, after I've chopped him into 6 PIECES/
Trust I spit a big bar BANGER, u talentless, your mum shoulda scraped u outta her womb with a HANGER/
Meech it's really not advised for u to RESPOND, call me mr whale cos I'm the biggest fish in the POND, this battles LONG- IM GONE// 

alrite uhhhhh...

flow so fuckin sick, make ah nigga wanna throw up/
mann i got heat, moe heat than eric spoelstra/
fly boy Meechie, grow wings when i roll up/
wrap ya ass up, than i squeeze till ya soul bust/
mann i aint playin, not ah muthafuckin game-ah (gamer)/
i'll leave ya red like ah muthafuckin paint-ah (painter)/
yeah i raise hell, but i always keep ah angel/
pussy like heaven, so good so i praise ha (her)/
yeah i stay high... but, i'll neva fall/
even if i was the moon, i could son (sun) all yall/
... you're jus ah fraud... life is ah lie/
i'm ah muthafuckin dragon to you lil dragon-fly/
infact i'ma lion like, kyle vanden bosch/
if u tuff as nailz, than i guess its hammer time/

Votes?

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Id say meechie took this one.
His flow alot better an more structured
whereas 32neilz would get choppy at points.
also his punchlines seemed more complex.

1-0

I think if flowetry had some nice punches
but his structure was of indeed

meechie came in and teared it up
and left nothing but a pil of ruble..LOL
overall his punches hit harder and his worplay tho basic
were nice...

vote= meechie

winner meechie...flow went to meechie..wordplay all though soft=meechie..not much on the multies and meechie had better punches...this was a decent battle

i wasn't tryin to use name play dat much in this particular 1 but i could have