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Here are two of my songs that I would like everyone to listen to ! Please feel free to leave constructive criticism !
[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zslJdVZc ... ideo_title[/video]
Black Clouds


[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=irWqExOu ... ure=relmfu[/video]
Ice Cold
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/where ... 18020.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/new-b ... 20882.html

It sounds good. But i will admit, your accent is super thick to the point i can only understand the last words of your punch. Rhythm sounds on point, quality is dope, nothing really sounds forced. The beginning to the second verse can afford to be turned up a bit. Man, your entire song sounds like a foreign language. Other that that, the sound of it is dope. 1

i like this bt lyk punchd said i could hardly undastand it but the people where u from prolly diggin this lots

I like black clouds, very good song. Im feeln the lyrics vibe, and your accent doens't take away from the song for me, I enjoyed it...Keeping putting out quality material man