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word

Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 9:14 am
by Haz
Why look for trouble when its in the Air Like spirits?
Heavy in the zone, you won't hear Light lyrics..
Like the beat is dark, topless .. Sea This Ark?
Its my Relief of sharks that huff with their heads on fire
Like they breathe the spark that brought Venom out of Peta Park
Gotta ride for my vision..you're crazy If u Expect Me ta Park
Picture me a Mountain..the Pad's here for support Like a Free Accountant
Will my Rebel flow ever settle..NO, Running Like Cycles Won't Flee The Fountain
Inner demons screaming Like he is Shouting, Monsters how the Story Goes
killings Not fufilling forget a glory show, positive got alot ta give oppisote
of alota kids gunna score me dough...though i'll Even the score
goals Like the mian event Leaving the floor, fireworks up rising, bumping Nas
believing in more..Fuck Myons, this is some timing, though I Won't pause my Life
like these Bums crying,30's suppose to be 20..thats me in a few days...
can't hit 40 as Shit for my story..sipping a 40..so like Salon Trends my dues Paid
Elevating..Blazing these stages through pages Its Like a new Play
Nuisance with Music..Knew this once sitting still for a Second pushed my Movement,
higher power..keeping me from Fire power, when shits real
wondering whats good like a entire hour..Keeping ya cool N keeping cool
2 different things don't be a fool...no killa intentions giving me the fuel
I'm not a Liar cowards..Use to run round checking each Run down
Like examining tire powder

Re: word

Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2011 10:54 am
by Phasewon
Nice verse, shit was ill with the rhyme switch ups, fell off a lil toward the end, I was looking for something to quote but nothing in particular stood out, nice use of multies and rhyme schemes nonetheless.