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I've got uncomparable rhymes,you've got unbearable lines.
I'll use a pair of my lines to tare up your rhymes.
Can't believe I'm sharing the lime with such a terrible mind.
Now I'm baring my nines, this war's apparently mine.
So you might as well pack your bags like a damn vaccation.
I can smell you from here, the fumes cause sedation.
Damn!What's the duration since your last self sanitation.
The only dudes that smell like that work at farms and gas stations.
He fucked himself taking this battle...self masturbation.
Chessboard and this rap game have no correlation.
So should I KING this QUEEN cause he's just a ROOK. (rookie)
Or move like a "knight" and "L" this babbling brook.
I love throwing jabs but ain't too shabby with hooks.
I'll throw battery acid on his face to improve his raggedy looks.
Chess hard? Hell he gets petrified reading mildly scary books.
And winning this battle would be the only way I'd consider you a crook.

Like ur structure to ur barz, kinda like my style, our battle should be tight, keep up the good work man

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He's a PINK N SHALLOW QUEEN!You Think L Battle Fiends?Fuck we only heard of GRIMM ON HALLOWEEN!!/dawg you think you dope?NO WAY FAGGOT!Wouldnt see this kat on a DOPE PROPAIN ADVERT!Plus battlin me you'll run outta lines quicker than a BROKE COCAIN ADDICT!//He's droppin some PEDACURES N SHXT!He's been hurt before,doctors BETTER CURE THIS BITCH!Never seen him drop -nice punches- even if he MANECURED HIS FISTS//No backup!shot ya boys AND THEIR CAUGHT UP!Spit Fast N Bomb Fucks!Hate Asians and this Chinese Baby is probably as fake AS THEIR PRODUCTS!!/This Pest Got the Best Shots?,Claim a rasta,nigger fuck the DreadLocks!he's armpits probably so hairy you'd think he had King-Kong in a HeadLock!!

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please vote ya'll

Flow - Grimm


Punches - Chessboard


Personal's - None


Multies - None



Wordplay - Chessboard





My Vote Goes To Chessboard - He Just Had The Better Battle Verse Even If The Structre Was Fucked He Came With Harder Hitting Punches And Better Wordplay

Nice flow on grimms, I enjoyed the read but I have to agree with orfadox, chess had much tougher punches ie:you'll run outta lines faster than a broke cocaine addict, and- couldn't throw nice punches if u manacured your fists.
+1 chess

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both dudes came with some nice lines
but chessboard most def had the hardest punches
and i think some personals also
the lines 32neilz qouted
are a dead give away to show who's winnin this battle

Vote = chessboard

thanks for the comments guys...but in reference to not having multies...you should read mine more carefully