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5 barz, 3 rounds, first to 2 votes wins
deadline 1 week

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i don't want to wait a week...no one that has accepted has responded yet and i want my record to start so we can do this when you have more time...or i'll come back to it...i just want to see what this site has to offer for battlers

-- Fri Mar 18, 2011 6:02 am --

respect though

Here's mine for first round cuz:
32neilz, the barz get DEEPER, imma send this fool to see the GRIMM REAPER, go to hell, pay ur RESPECT, run up in ur house and hit ur mum with the TECH/
My skillz too much for u- UNOBTAINABLE, the steels still STAINABLE, give up now, deals on the TABLE, or go down in history like a FABLE/
I'm a big dog, GRIMMS a POODLE, he's in hot water like a POT NOODLE, I'll put cream on he's head like the top of an apple STRUDLE/
Why the fuck u messing with raps KING, u dun fucked up now, ur situation is GRIMM, may be White but I'm sicker than SLIM, vote now who's sicker- me or HIM/
Now I'll end the first ROUND chasing POUNDS with verbs and NOUNS, fuck I GRIMM, u a CLOWN//

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cool bro...3 rounds...i got you...mine will be up shortly

I'll vote ur test battle for u too

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I'll cut 32 in half with sixteen shots
Neilz is a petafile who thinks pre-teens are hot.
No skills or vocab so why even flip.
He can only "flow" once a month..He's a bleeding clit.
Show this fag a big dick and 32-neilz (kneels)
Who gives a fuck how this dirty dude feels.
I hit hard with my raps..like a hundred sacks.
Hand off this beating to 32 now he's "running back"
To his crib,little baby,go cuddle with mother.
But wear a rubber or wind up in a "jam" like smuckers"

Grimm although ur barz are HOT, I hold 2 glocks, bro that's (neilz) 32 SHOTS, I JOT shit with murder PLOTS/
Eat mcs for breakfast, lunch and DINNER, u eat no one, ur anorexic, that's why ur getting THINNER/
This battle could get kinda HEATED cos I'll come find u and smack u down until ur SEATED, I cannot be DEFEATED, u so whack the mods see ur shit and it gets DELETED/
U say u wanna check the COMPETITION, LISTEN, I'll send u on the road to PERDITION, I'm a viper HISSIN, on a verbal venemous MISSION, u gettin shook now, I started PISSIN/
I'm a cutthroat and a THUG bustin SLUGS, smokin dro and slinging DRUGS, yo grimm, wen it comes to battling I'm Jin//

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That's ironic you mention Jin and said you were him.
Since he's played out in the battle scene..no one respects him.
And what's 32 shots gonna do if none of 'em hit
I'll put track shoes on my dick and let it "run" in your bitch.
My razor blade words lacerate till there's nothing to stitch.
No one's bumping your shit..You'll get stuffed in a ditch.
every time I flip your lines it's like I'm using a shovel.
Cause I can bury you easily with every rebutle.
you're trash, you're ass, just an irretating rash.
poor gas on your family tree,strike a match and turn it to ash.

All the (neilz)32 will hit HOME, cos I aim with presision when I spark the CHROME, 5 to each leg and arm, 10 to the torso and 2to the DOME, u ain't goin HOME/
As for runnin up in my BITCH, she'd CUT ur throat QUICK, but i hope u have FUN, cos why u there I'll be strapping on a jimmy to fuck ur MUM/
I'll leave u seeing STARS, only my 3rd bar and I got u lickin ur mental SCARZ, u got me seeing red like I'm livin on MARS/
I'm dark man I live my life in the SHADE,when it comes to rap, u Dutch and imma 8th of HIGHGRADE, chop u up like apple with a BLADE/
5 barz, CLASH is at a CLOSE, I smack grimms sister outta her CLOTHES, fuck her and keep her PANTIEHOSE//

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I've got no siblings and my moms passed away
So those flips are nullified but that's o.k.
Cause you're just a no talent rapper that'll never make it.
Which makes you a porno bitch...You sure can fake it.
You're structure is pitiful and hard to follow.
even in liquid form it would be hard to swallow.
So you admit that it would take 32 hits..I need one
And since the crowd can't feel you they seem numb.
I wouldn't lose even if you and The Saurus Teamed up.
Man! I wish you WERE on Mars..SCOTTY beam'em up.

Vote people.

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Grimm wrote: I hit hard with my raps..like a hundred sacks.
Hand off this beating to 32 now he's "running back"
To his crib,little baby,go cuddle with mother.
But wear a rubber or wind up in a "jam" like smuckers"

I think that was the best lines of the battle. I liked grimm's wordplay more n he did seem to hit harder with the punches. I felt 32neilz, was more into similies which is okay, but this didn't hit as hard. Grimm was a lil more clever in attacking his opponent personally, with name callin..i know u guys don't know each other but...Anyway the rest was pretty even; flow, etc. I would vote grimm.

Safe illa appreciate u voting

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Nice battle...Multies - hardly saw any but Grimm edged it with em.Punches - Grimm,Nameplay - Grimm,Consistency - Grim,Metaphors - 32neilz,Flow - Grimm...Overall Vote Grim With A TKO!Liked this battle,big ups ta both kats,but in my opinion Grimm came nicer.

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