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due one week for MURK...5 bars

Yeah duke, let's have a go...

Um, the hour limit honestly might not work with me, personal shit going on, but I dont want to take alot of your time either... I can get something up probably by this weekend....

And please, make it epic for the fans haha... Let's shoot the fair one too... No homework. Nameflips and pure punches... No recycling shit, no biting shit, no dickriders, nothing... One for the books...

6 bars sound like a long enough set?

Let me know... One.

my check...i've wanted someone better...sorry it took me a minute...if you could have it up by this up coming weekend that's cool...no flips either...i'm dropping mine soon..check on 5 bars and normal categories...respect.

-- Wed Mar 30, 2011 10:30 am --
Italian bread,Murk,Why the Irish nickname?
There's no "M-C" in you and I heard you're bitch made.
Is it because beer is the only subject where you know your shit mane?(man)
Or maybe you're so bitch and lame you thought it was a sick name.
This fast food employee..Murk Miss-Nasty...
Pitty ass face it's burger grease acne..
I'll "MURK" this "NASTY",dried out little chicken MCnugget.
Tare his body and dunk it.give'em a "six piece" to the stomach.
I heard you LOVE the "milkshake" and have the "anatomy" of a fry.
But your "brown eye apple pie" is double super-sized.(gapping asshole)
This clown should change MURK(since he doesn't)to Ronald
and deffintely lose the NASTY(since he isn't) for Donald.

Man... Im not putting dashes and shit and highlighting shit... If you can find the wordplay and mutli's, just dont vote... Let's get it...

Here's this dude, on another~whim, I'll smother~him with bullets and blood will cover~him
Cuz 'fairy tale' rhymes get murdered in this 'graphic novel', just ask the 'Brothers~Grimm'!!!

I even got your mother~hemmed up, Illest will report-this-shit, legally divorce-this-bitch
For being the 'pediphile that had some M&M's', just so he could be 'enjoyed-by-kids'!!!
(Oh, for the ones that dont know, his name has two M's at the end of it)

Someone ""deport""-this-snitch, he's ""not from our planet"", he could never travel a road~this~worthy
I seriously doubt it, if this fucker looks like that dude from ""Bill and Ted's Bogus~Journey""!!!
http://www.imdb.com/media/rm3338961920/tt0101452

My focus,~homie, is on murderin-you, who heard-of-this-dude, disturbing,- the-proof is like ` this ` thin
Cuz the only way the outlook of this match looks to the likes ` of ` Grimm is if you side ` with `him!!! (Dead!)

Then ya'll can die ` with ` him, fuck death, I choose life, Grimm would be Miss Taylor re-incarnate
The only time 'Grimm been in a black hood' was when 'he was slinging wood one could farm~with'!!!



All of the ~ and - and ` denote multi
Quotations denote wordplay... There you have it.

Flow-grimm (multiple multies throughout made it speak clean)
Punches-murk (they were few but they all had suspense to help build them up, they just hit harder)
Name flips-grimm (last bar was funny as shit lol)

Mvgt-grimm, but yall need a longer second round and I might not have seen all the multies and wordplay stated by murk. But shit I am pretty slow....

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Damn yo, Ill edit it haha... Just so everyone can see it.

Edited verse without changing a single word...

Vote stands at 0-1 Grimm.

Shitt Murk Had The Punches
Murk had multi's
grimm had flow
personals grimm

Overall Tight Battle
MVGT: Murk Overall better verse even though a little harder to read
count this crew vote. Unless It's House Rules

-- Sat Apr 02, 2011 2:12 pm --

Shitt Murk Had The Punches
Murk had multi's
grimm had flow
personals grimm

Overall Tight Battle
MVGT: Murk Overall better verse even though a little harder to read
count this crew vote. Unless It's House Rules

Vote counted fam. I respect the breakdown...


Vote count is 1-1.

GRIMM

Italian bread,Murk,Why the Irish nickname?
There's no "M-C" in you and I heard you're bitch made.
Fire
Is it because beer is the only subject where you know your shit mane?(man)
Or maybe you're so bitch and lame you thought it was a sick name.
shoulda attacked him somewhere else but still good
This fast food employee..Murk Miss-Nasty...
Pitty ass face it's burger grease acne..
not feelin it
I'll "MURK" this "NASTY",dried out little chicken MCnugget.
Tare his body and dunk it.give'em a "six piece" to the stomach.
good hit
I heard you LOVE the "milkshake" and have the "anatomy" of a fry.
But your "brown eye apple pie" is double super-sized okay
This clown should change MURK(since he doesn't)to Ronald
and deffintely lose the NASTY(since he isn't) for Donald.
iight the mcdonalds shit got old

MURK

Here's this dude, on another~whim, I'll smother~him with bullets and blood will cover~him
Cuz 'fairy tale' rhymes get murdered in this 'graphic novel', just ask the 'Brothers~Grimm'!!!
FUKKIN SIKK!
I even got your mother~hemmed up, Illest will report-this-shit, legally divorce-this-bitch
For being the 'pediphile that had some M&M's', just so he could be 'enjoyed-by-kids'!!!
yeah boi
Someone ""deport""-this-snitch, he's ""not from our planet"", he could never travel a road~this~worthy
I seriously doubt it, if this fucker looks like that dude from ""Bill and Ted's Bogus~Journey""!!!
not so hot
My focus,~homie, is on murderin-you, who heard-of-this-dude, disturbing,- the-proof is like ` this ` thin
Cuz the only way the outlook of this match looks to the likes ` of ` Grimm is if you side ` with `him!!! (Dead!)
Hard shit
Then ya'll can die ` with ` him, fuck death, I choose life, Grimm would be Miss Taylor re-incarnate
The only time 'Grimm been in a black hood' was when 'he was slinging wood one could farm~with'!!!

SIKKK!!

This battle was dope... prolly one of the best ive seen on here...

MVGT MURK tho cuz his shit was more consistant and his punches hit way harder...
Grimm killed it on the flow but thats not what wins battles


Vote: Murk

MVGT MURK tho cuz his shit was more consistant and his punches hit way harder...
Grimm killed it on the flow but thats not what wins battles


Vote: Murk[/b]

EDIT TRIPLE QUADRUPALE POST

Word, thank you for the breakdown and vote. Both of us appreciate it, Im sure!

Vote 2-1 Murk's way.

we do appreciate it..thanks...check on the 2-1...

3-1 murk

Flow - Grimm
Punches - Murk
Personals - Murk
Disses - Murk
Vote - Murk

Overall, Grimm - I like how you've been more "multie" oriented. Your ideas are there its just not hitting as hard in your bars. I think you'll continue elevating and be nice. Murk pretty much took this with more clever punches, a couple of nameplays, and harder hitting & direct disses. Good battle folks.

Thread closed and records updated.

Good batttle.

Murk wins TKO.