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48 hour due date..5 bars(10 lines), no flipping or rebuttles...judge on flow,personals,punches,ad wordplay...vote ya'll

-- Sat Mar 26, 2011 1:27 pm --

Fuck this 19 year old dropout, his whole life's a cop out.(true=19/dropout)
M-33 has dirty knees from his dad pulling his cock out..
and treating M like a dog..Damn!.. 1st round knock out.
I'll finish you like MAN KIND and pull that dirty sock out.(socko/WWE)
M-33 must mean molested 33 times.
The K9 is referring to my third line.(doggy style)
The 1 stands for times you been with a chick...
At least with out paying her to suck your dick..
I'm giving this GOPHER a GOLDEN shower and a mud bath.(piss and shit on him)
In school he couldn't even "pass gas" he's such a dumb ass.
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(he's from Minnesota...the Golden Gophers is the college football team=line9)

Haha good 1

Psst, hey lemme tell you a secret... I see dead people,
Oh, wait that's only grimm,

This dropout knock ya lights out, leave a smile on a grim day cuz its seeming kinda light out,

You pussy proper, neva alter your ears off me, my gay (happy) stalker,

Live your life or get beat off her, and if dat works your just softer,

If your names grimm no wonder there's no life in all your verses,

So versus me I'm thinkin you juzz killed yoself off on purpose.

My gopher flow will kill all 300 of your Spartans,

You commin at my state without check-in (checking) your offense,

This menace-soda (minnesota) concoction will have your wolverines in coffins,

And while your calculations are off as spaceships,
Mines 1,

The only bitches anything you touched waz your moms anus.

(your from Michigan MSU-Spartans- line 6
MSU- wolverines- line

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i was feeling Grimms a bit more, it just seems better. Though i will give you the grimm has no life in his verses line, that was pretty sick.

honestly? you need to come much harder with the insults an personal you wanna humiliate this kid as much as you possibly can in a short space of time also it needs multies to improve the flow an lay off with the punchline information let the crowd work out what you mean anything you feel you need to explain shouldnt even be mentioned . much respect tho man this was an aight diss the passing gas line was the best for me. ive seen much better from you grimm.

"If your names grimm no wonder there's no life in all your verses,
So versus me I'm thinkin you juzz killed yoself off on purpose."
^ This was hot.

M33K's flow was better, it just read better and had more rhythm.
Grimm had more personals and better punches, except for that one up there.

"and treating M like a dog..Damn!.. 1st round knock out.
I'll finish you like MAN KIND and pull that dirty sock out."
^ loved this.

I thought that Grimm overall had a more technical rhyme with more punchlines and personals. But M33K pulled it out with that one line, and a better flow.

VOTE: M33k.

As a side note, what is with double spacing that is wack. And is the parentheses thing something people do now?

Grimm Has My Vote It Sounded Much Cleaner
But Good Verses Guys Keep it Up

3-1 me...not sure who comeback voted for

grimm had a better structure and flow overall but some of m33's lines packed more of a punch to me, so im voting m33K91.

3-2 me

-- Wed Apr 06, 2011 4:33 am --

Shawnmd's vote doesnt count. He doesnt have 50 posts or any battles under his belt. I believe this has been said before about his voting.

I agree with Cory here. It seems like Ive read better from M33K, and he didnt really bring much to the table in this one, while Grim is showing signs of improvement with every verse.

Vote - Grim

4-1 Grim tko