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iight i just wanna make it quikk....
8 bars... 1 line = 1 bar...

Voting
3-0 k.o
4-1 tko
5 closes battle.
Verses Due asap
chekk in then drop.
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Edit: Title Change

My vomits sicker than malaria carrying PESTS,

Whose only purpose on earth is to be a nuisance to vets,

And I be that is,

Cause me I been as sick as A I D kids,

Pesticide your ballsack so you can neva bust jizz,

You'll neva be fly as meek is,

Your more like a tapeworm in snoop,

I'll burn a dragon fly with no hook in the loop.

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Yo...

Your rap styles weak, and homie its awfully funny/1
you lakk game like your on boardwalk wit no monopoly money//2
I got that bad boy swag, and it might jakk ya bitch son/3
I Blat 'M' '33' times, and they gon need a 'K9' to get this '1'//4
This Bitch Punks shits junk, Find ya writtens in a trash heap/5
Sadly this wack G raps that be spit outdated like last week/6
Someone shoulda told you young you just needa quit/7
Cuz you a whore without two hands man, you aint beatin shit//8

EDIT: Spelled Quick instead of quit.

I have to vote for pest a weak battle though
i feel like if m33k91's verse was longer he could have won
and pest had better name play & punchlines

1-0 Thanks for voting.

Good shit pest lol

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yeah thanks doggy its been a minute...
your shit was sikk to...
ummm... Uppin for votes.

-- Sun Mar 27, 2011 5:51 am --

uppin 4 votes...

-- Sun Mar 27, 2011 5:55 am --

uppin for some votes...

Vote Pest 4 a T.K.O...

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aye chess... if you could explain your vote you should, id hate to count a vote not backed with fact ya know...
still 1-0
uppin for votes...

Weak battle IMO. Basic wordplay and punches. M33k91's verse was more self hype than anything else. Don't waste time, attack your opponent with every line. Catsweep to Pest. I've said this a lot recently, but newbs need to read the Text Help 101 by Solo thread on the Center of Elevation forum or the Classic Battles forum to learn more complex disses.

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-- Sun Mar 27, 2011 2:07 pm --

There is potential in both of you...keep at it and elevate...

for sure doggy thanks...
2-0 Me
Uppin for some more votes...

I have to go with pest...he had better name play, word play and punches...the flow was pretty even...by the way pest, in text battles a bar is two lines...it's all good though....ok battle guys...M33 has my respect but it needs to be all about your opponent not hype....keep at it ya'll

tHNAKS MAN... tHATS A 3-0 K.O...
GOOD BATTLE DOGGY

AND I KNEW THAT 2 LINES EQUALED A BAR IN A BATTLE... IM JUST USED TO THE NORMAL WAY...