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6 bars...no flips..house rules and category judging..good luck bro..this should be a hot battle....48 hours good for time?

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http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/tulip ... ml#p166301

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/immor ... ml#p166303

I'm about to RIPP-A chump in half when I JACK this bitch.
You should just flush all of your writtens..Your tracks are "shit"
You're the type of faggot that goes to playgrounds and smacks his lips..
Eyeballing kids while you play with your pinky..wait!..That's his dick!
Jack is sick,but no amount of"medecine"can keep'em from the "Coughin"(coffin)
I'll "microwave" this stick of butter..my "heat'll"make him soften.
Jack Da Rippa,I "waxed" your sista with a lit candle till her ass had blisters.
Which suprisingly fit in easily...I was told Jack used to fist-her.
RIPPA'S a walking punchline by himself..Yeah, Jack's a joke.
I'll make ya "ghost" cause You're about as real as a JACK-ELOPE.
There's "no money" for you in this industry,Jack,your raps are "broke."
R.I.P "Jackie" cause you hit about as hard as only taking half-a-toke.

-- Sun Apr 03, 2011 2:15 pm --

Aiight son, Ima key somethin' and make short work of you..

Look sonny,
Change tha kidd to critical & have his pencil pulled, anotha lame spittin' pitiful
It's juss the same sickenin' syllables, while punches literally 'Peel-Grimm' like a 'Thanksgivin Ritual'

& I Aint Kiddin' it's physical, Gimme soemthin’ to abuse and drop this kid quick
Or use glue to lock ya lips with, & if Life was looking Grimm than I guess my views are optimistic

Ya dudes are prolly bitches, Get controlled when ‘Europe/Your-Up’, like the way the Nazis sonned Britian
& now he’s got these thugs with ‘em? But they look more washed up than those Tsunami flood victims

You shoulda prolly ducked Rip then, Killustrators, take notes and don’t join in the game
Coz he about as noticed as coins in the change when the only Eyes that’s on Grimm is the ones in his name

Wit punchlines that points to the pain, You a stand up act so I guess he worth a laugh to me
But how on earth can he rap a free, about getting’ paid when dunny works in a factory???

Pshh..C'mon
You getting’ jumped & torched, im bout to dump ya corpse, so forget what ya newb crew thinks
Obviously, these few fools stink, Rollin’ wit more messed up characters than a YouTube link

EZ.

Vote: Jack da Rippa

Flow: different styles but you both had good flow
Personals: Jack
Punches: Jack


Grimm, solid battle, but JAck just came with some serious fuckin lines.

"Change tha kidd to critical & have his pencil pulled, anotha lame spittin' pitiful
It's juss the same sickenin' syllables, while punches literally 'Peel-Grimm' like a 'Thanksgivin Ritual'"

"You getting’ jumped & torched, im bout to dump ya corpse, so forget what ya newb crew thinks
Obviously, these few fools stink, Rollin’ wit more messed up characters than a YouTube link"

hot shit.

First off

Jack Da Rippa,I "waxed" your sista with a lit candle till her ass had blisters.
Which suprisingly fit in easily...I was told Jack used to fist-her.

HAHAHA

Flow-grimm
Punches-jack
Nameflips-grimm
Personals-jack
Wordplay-jack
MVGT-jack

Both of yall brought it though, good shit

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...... ill go with grimm on this one.

shawnmd..votes don't count unless you break it down...2-1 jack if he's cool with it otherwise 2-0 him

bumpin'...

you i gotta give it to grim

seems like his shit was less played

heres how the sceme plays out

flow- grim
-punches- tie(slightly leaning towards jack)
-personals- grim
enjoyment- tie
best lines- tie


-as it stands grimm got my vote

haha

Bumpin' for a couple of vet votes instead of these dumb ass rookies tryna up they post count and be funny.

ok

My vote goes to Jack. While not all of Jack's bar were hard hitting, he had more consistant punches and they were delivered well. I think Grimm has some nice concepts in his verse, and if he were to tighten up his delivery, he could be a hell of a force on the site... His punchlines just miss when it comes to the actual punch in some spots, and it hurts the verse. Nice battle guys, keep them coming.

you got this Jack nice match..i'm getting there though

Thx 4 the battle.

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