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I'll rip-this-skippa to shreds, jack-the-wigga takes shots of liquor just-to-get-a piece of Jills leg, and still can't figure why he can't get the whole thing instead, its probably cause his dicks the size of a pencil lead,
well, your-multies-thast-are-written-like-this- arent really multies. rip-this-skippa, jack-the-wigga, only has wigga and rippa to rhyme. Anyways, the punch with Jill is kinda weak. An attemopt at nameflip, and punch with the small dick, but its rtather inneffective as an opener.
The last chick this dick rida picked up, was more of nigga with a push up bra and quick release nut/
I ain't sayin jack likes it in the butt, he just thinks its sexy when another man likes to "nip-nd-tuck,"/
this was a little better, but the wording is very basic. I took the liberty of dividing the line so it looks more like a bar. Its easier for me to catch a flow if i know where im supposed to catch my breath "/". Or else it reads like a run on sentence. Anyways, the bar is repetative as a punch. and you should have said he likes it in the butt lol.
And as far as battles, its mainly good luck,
hes breast fed off rabbit nips and he stays away from the "black cats" in clubs,
just a text-cee thug typing out all his mean mugs,
no actual punch is evident. Im unable to break down two lines out of this aswell. I can into three though lol, or one short linbe and one long line which breaks flow, or puts you over the line limit.
This fag enjoyed it when Scott James balled on him, and whooped that ass in the name game,
I take flames and light a fire under his ass, worse than his herpes outbreak, he's "inflamed,"
id the wording was bettter, the insult would be too. I see the personal with james, but that battle is still open so no loser yet. Prolly your best so far.
I just took 5 shots AT jack, and I think he's still laying on his back,
his bars just flat lined, and the "proof" was only a "MEEK" slap...
this puts you over the limit man, but good attempt at name playing yourself. If your stuff was harder, it would have been an effective punch, but seeing as we cant figure out the flow to begin with, its simply wrong.

Str8 Breezy Mode...
Nice insult, to the point, but the flow was hard to catch lol
I love a mismatch, another nigga blowin' smoke like he was puffin' zig zags
Your as dumb as shit cat, by misspellin' Minnesota & that's where ya fuckin' cribs at??
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lol at the personal. Nice opener, but im pretty sure you dont need two "as" in the second line.
& it's nothin', kids whack, I might as well be a mod the way I lock ya shit up
It's not a prob, this kid sucks, and aint a CNA the same job a bitch does???
Im not covinced that this fully rhymes man. Rhyme schem is on point, having two different patters is cool. I dont know what a CNA is but lol at its a bitch job.
You need to lock ya lips chump, make you put ya hands up as you beg like addicts
My punches in this thread like magic, quick to stop Meeks on the streets like the red light traffic
other that using his name, which can be interchanged with anyones, its an open bar to anyone. Good job on carrying over the rhyme scheme, but you should have kept coming with something personal.
It's not best to write whack shit, ya trash kidd as Jack/Ripp juss hurdles deaths work
& Every word'll wreck jerk, while punches lay below the chin like a turtle neck shirt
lol at the punch, but again, open bar that can be spat against anyone. The whjole Jack/Ripp seems forced tbh.
Be honest cos you gay, shook, whack, you niggas came from where? so Imma chase rooks back
Bring ya boys, coz they some 'stay put cats', the types that stay directly on the side like tha facebook apps
lol, Best by far.
EZ..
being arrogant usually is