Hip Hop Forum

Yeah, AudioKilla
Uhh, Jobe's back
Back at it again

Uh,
So tell me now, how yall not ever did mention me?
Last year was good, but I've got better this century
I got "X", but I will EXcel, yall wont stop, never to endin' me
Yet several tried, they still tryin' to take me out of mine
I'll drop records to mention me
But haters doubt in time, so usually they be out of time
"This what the future's greatest about", as why the few they announced, but lied
How the fuck you support beginners?
Exit old exports, and then few imports delivers
The wholesome whom were few important, niggas
But some were few whom is poorly mentioned
Understand and realize real recognizes the realist
Reason thats why youre losing more attention
Yea, all yall terrified and garbage, beware cause terror lies regardless
Im so baron mind and heartless, entire paragraphed terror lines the hardest
Ya boy reppin' Oak, when its bout pre- era time has started
Unvarified about me, so you unknown what my variable lacks.. please beware
See I warned them before I were darin' to rap, see me where
Haters are like, "Yo, Jobe did it again?.. Damn.", hes checked
Theres no variable as being squared
Its my ability that let me achieve above, but its my character that keep me there
Cause if character counts like a story, then its the narrative thats being aired.

"And BITCH! -
I aint on a bench,
Im the benchmark of my century."

Ughh, yep
Uh huh

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Neva read any of ya drops but heres some feedback.

Lyrics was kind of basic. Flow was there but nothin' real hard hitting that stood out. One syllable lines are aiight for some bars but consistantly shows a need for elevation. Maybe try to work in a couple of multies in your setup. Would sound a lot better. Besides that, you seem to have decent creativity so no problem showing that. If you came a little harder in your delivery with multies and such it would sound a lot better. Either way, welcome back to illest.

I aint on my entire styles yet.

This was not suppost to be hard hitting, I did it on purpose just to freestyle.

Multies was basic, for personal reasons but I can show you my excelled side of rap.

N Thank you, Im glad to be back.

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