Hip Hop Forum

to this instrumental
http://www.openmindsentertainment.com/beats/436/


the type to always stay true to the movement
the student needs to learn there's room for improvement
i lose it on a track and abuse it
but don't confuse it, this shit here is called hip hop music
it's the only language i'm fluent in I gotta keep on pursuing it
it's called the game son, i will not be losing it
watch the track as i begin spew on it
thats right bitches i'm doing it
rap in harmony but speak in silence
my rhymes remain timeless to your science
i too often react with violence
but i guess it's because i'm to biased
i'm truly brightest when i'm at my highest
my flow is the tightest and you can't deny this
I'm the finest at writing rhymes, this
chronic's got me looking all shang "high", bitch

I like that you used some nice vocab , but that flow could of been a little better ... it was still a good drop man .

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yeah pablo1212 wuz right it had good vocab. all n all it wuz good

just make your flow smoother and it will be even doper.

This seems like one of those verses that you gotta hear to really feel it. I like the written but you might have a different idea for the flow of it than I do. Good post man.