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(in progress)
to drakes successful instrumental

look at success then tell me what you think you see
i see an impossible obstacle out in front me
cannot move, cannot think, i cannot even breathe
and truthfully i feel like as if it's time to leave
money's my motivation, i move on and thats no doubt
if they causing problems, then go head, throw them hoes out
then i'll get baked up and take up the whole couch
come on boy we bringing up the whole south, let's roll out
listen dawg my barks loud enough, i ain't a no hush puppy
i could be an asshole the public would still love me
in a room full of people i stand as mister solo
i get drunk, surpass crazy and then go four loko
i ain't in the game for this superficiality
you see this as a dream but this is my reality
i took my hopes turned it in to actuality
just cause it's a game don't mistake its lethality

Honestly,
The promise of dollas just aint enough for me
The respect is the only thing you need
Cause you can bet that if you sing for free,
The piper will never be paid for his misery
You work hard just to start spendin more cash
Play more cards, success aint in the forecast
Bet a little, or you can bet it all but
I guarantee that moneys the last thing you would want back..
If you get another chance, would you change strategies, or
Make the same mistake, and create catastrophe?
If women say it aint bout money, I would doubt them
Just do your best no matter what the outcome
Dont get yourself in holes you cant get out from
Stick to family, cuz you cant live without them
You aint alone even when you feel its Just you
No matter the struggle, work hard to be successful

-Wrote it just now for the hell of it. Hope yall like it..

At static i love the flow and the structure

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gunshots echo in the night, hood theme
bitches on they grind since they was fourteen
teens with inf beams and false dreams
toss and turn at nights getting no sleep
sent to school the next day but don't eat -
no breakfast it's reckless but they won't speak
walk a mile in they shoes nigga, both feet
never underestimate having nothing to lose
cuz when faced with life or death it's nothing to choose
another death in the projects, not on the news
no witness interviews
fucking right i out off this cesspool

'I just wanna be, I just wanna be, I just wanna be successful"

Is this a fucking cypher??? No.... so I'm just gon review static's...

Not as many multies in this as your other drops, but it didn't take away from it at all. Would love to see a finished version. And I think your pretty cool for not jappin off on free posting lol.

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i was gonna but i was like fuck it let the kids have fun lol