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-- Wed Apr 13, 2011 11:13 am --

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-- Wed Apr 13, 2011 11:51 am --

Yo watch this little kitty/
Oh shit i mean mitty/

Gets put into his place/
You dont want to battle me cause ill cum on your girls face/
Smack your moms ass till its as red as blood/
This guy should stick with beats before this buildings full of his blood

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Mitty spits fire that collapse entire empires,
I'm taking over this bitch crown me call me sire/

Make me king, yo you should try to sing- because your stats,
Make you look like a liar you can't be lyrically inclined to rap/

Moneymaker, you probably prewrite rhymes on paper- Tip:,
Change your style when it's not working...any other takers?/

Im going to be honest here: MITTY ROCKED MONEY :


Money, with suck short bars, you leave no from for wordplay or punches, personals name flips nada man. Not even flow. Up your game if you wanna beat rellik



Mitty, welcome to the site, i see the personal tactic which you used, but you lacked in everything else really. Flow and that one personal tactic gave you the vote from me.



MVGT Mitty

Not bad for my first battle. It was only 3 bars...not much to work with, but I did it. I might have to look up what we get judged on to improve. Thanks for the feedback.

yeah i'ma have to go with mitty on this

for a quick battle it is what is..

both were not the greatest

but a small verse equals small punches

but yeah clean sweep by mitty

2-0

mitty was personal on the last half..had better flow and structure but mitty, be careful not to boost yourself too much..focus on killing your oppenents soul..LOL..make 'em cry..LOL...money..keep at it...but really try to lengthen your lines..set up punches and wordplay..over all Mitty took the cats. so...
MVGT: Mitty

Thanks grimm that was all freestyle.i needed something to get my brain going for Rellik

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Mitty wins KO.