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6 bars...24 hours from check..house rules..no flips

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This is my check.

This itty-bitty mini MITTY is shitty
You're pussy like kitties it's a pity you picked me

You got a body like a "whale" and your mouth's a "blow hole"
You're as bald as MOBY..DICK and twice the homo..

I got those "Randy Macho Man" bars.My flow is "Savage".
I "deliver" dope verses while you just "hold your package".

Your government name suits you cause you don't MATTer.
"Door MATT"...get "stepped on" and your neck "rung" like ladders.

I should slap you, Matthew,"sound off with metal" like "tap shoes".
Flash tools and clap you or beat your ass like kids at your last school.

Your flow's "leaning to the left"..something just ain't "right"
It's like a horse-fucking pornstar.. You just ain't tight.

You're the Grim...supposedly the keeper of death,
The only thing to fear here isn't words but your breath/

Since it's obvious the Colgate bandit has got more game,
Lyrically now it's obvious Mitty has got more brain/

Where's the intellect? Your simple rhymes don't sound intelligent,
So you're first and second bars to me completely irrelevant/

The whole rap as a matter of fact to me you're wack, you're
not cool-school you need to go back and maybe try for track/

That wasn't what I'd call even an attempt at an attack,
You can see what really happens when you try to step to this Matt/

You can step into a biz-at you got popped like a zit splat,
I just got the wit that beats all that small time chit-chat/

-- Wed Apr 13, 2011 10:54 pm --

I know you beat me on delivery because it's gonna be hard for people to understand my rhyme...I just read the help thing for text battles (FUCK). It's all good though. Very good delivery, but Shitty Mitty is way too played out to me. Heard it too many times from many MC's. Not gonna lie though...I laughed.

yeah well..i haven't battle you and mitty is weird name to flip...LOL..you'll be straight,you just need to be more personal

Alright this was a good battle.

Flow-grimm
Punches-grimm
Wordplay-tie
Mulities-tie
Enjoyment-mitty

MVGT-Grimm the only thing i think you need to work on is making the battle funny and enjoying

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appreciate that money...but some people want funny and others want the wordplay and wow factor so...i try to do both

1-0..me

yeah this is close to me

personals- grim
punches-tie
flow-grim
enjoyment-tie
Everything else was a tie


m.v. - GRIM

Both had good flow and structure, grims verse seemed to hit alot harder, as he always does. But for me man I'm a lover of the joke effect and Mitty had that, it's a personal preference.
Mvgt: mitty

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2-1 me

I like to tell jokes because I likes to smoke:)

This shaped up to be a very good and close battle... Here's what I think...

Mutli's- Grim. You have come a long way with these. Nicely done.
Flow- Both did well, but a slight edge to Grim I think because of the multi's
Disses- Im going with a tie on this one
Punchlines- Grim. Just had more comedy mixed in his verse
Wordplay- Grim by a pretty good margin

Mitty- you're stepping up with every verse, and I give you props for that, keep it coming.

Grim- the same for you, as you've been doing alot better with every bar you write.

Vote- Grim

I can respect an honest opinion.

3-1

Hoestly, MVGT Grimm.

Both came alright, but i felt a tad more heat coming from Grim than i did Mitty. Mitty, i was waiting for more the whole time, also thought you were flipping his verse... but nothing big enough to matter. Flow was rather equal, but mittys 4th bar threw it completely off for me. The jokes were cool, but they didnt have enough insults behind them, if you polish that aspect mitty, you'll be a sick battler man. Kudos none the less to both.