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32Neilz disses everything American
JDR disses everything British

Ha, goodluck

Dope idea bro, well chizeck and good luck

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Check & goodluck as well

This my drop, might be a bit over the specified barz/lines bro.


Dwight.D. Eisenhower said "only Americans can HURT AMERICA", neilz must be a YANK cos im about to "MURK AMERICA",I don't get some of the SPEECH- "homie" there's alot to TEACH, some of the bullshit Americans SAY " America is not just a country, but a WAY/(carrie latet)

If "y'all" ain't "shooting HOOPS", ur sippin a "40", chillin on "STOOPS", or PLAYING "DICE", I'm "SLEIGHING"(slaying) ICE, 32'll LAY-IT-NICE, America, fuck the Stars and STRIPES, being PATRIOTIC, controlled- live your lifes ROBOTIC, utterly IDIOTIC/

Governmet controlled by ILLUMINATI, don't believe me look (http://www.ittanimulli.com)- they own the defensive PARTY, truths all based on fake RUMOUR STANDING, rewind to 1969 when y'all faked the LUNAR LANDING!!/

Always claiming BLOOD or CRIP, selling dope and BUSTING CLIPS, and why the fuck do y'all be calling BOOBIES- TITS, true your rappers MAKING HITS, but most like ja rule- secretly TAKING DICKS, oh how the scale TIPS/

Talking bout tipping SCALES, you all some fat FUCKS bout 30% weighing as much as WHALES- nip and TUCK, eat so much that y'all barley SPEAK, spend 23 hours eating, 7 days of the WEEK, obesity rising, usa's futures looking BLEAK/

Good at making cars, ford, Chrysler and LEXUS, end this in the words of Davy Crocket " you can go to hell cos I'm going to TEXAS"  

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-- Fri Apr 15, 2011 9:01 pm --

Typo 3rd bar it's itanimulli.com one t instead of two- my bad

it's star spangled banner time bitch haha

Britain, I claim this much, yall gay as fuck and most that live there even say it sucks
Did Jew know your blamed a bunch? cos Palestine was Palestine until you Gave it Up

& I'm amazed at such, even the wars that got you blazed and cut but theys a place & time for that
How can you claim to enlighten cats? Boring got this American Eye Dull, thats why we gave Simon back

Most got brains, minus facts, & I dont grudge wit kids even History claimed Da Rippa loved tha Britts
So much he dug his fist in ya guts wit tips but most of yall don't understand Bars wit ya Pubs & shit

& ya Royal Family? how dumb is this? Even ya Queens son's a bitch wit his Kids On a path
The Britts Gonna' crash, as long as Charles is in Charge, we gon' SIT COM & LAUGH

Now what are you blamed wit next? maybe the Plague of death? it was these haters that caused disease
What about tha favors from all ya peeps? Hitler woulda owned you fucks if not for ya Neighbors across the seas

So fuck ya crumpets and dumbshit, We don't measure up the same so they dont need an inch
The truth is sweet as shit but don't compare ya self to Americans when you couldnt even beat tha French

This was actually a good battle idea.

Flow-Jack though choppy at times the multies made it easier to read.
Punches- Jack
Multies-tie
Wordplay-32 (he used the "slaying" thing, I didn't really see anything else)
Subject execution-Jack
(if I ain't judging on the right categories someone just tell me)

Basically my vote goes to Jack. 32 woulda won if he did a little more research I think, cause it looks like Jack did his. And 32's ending seemed like not too much thought went into it.

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insane idea, this is the revolutionary rap battle lol

flow- Jack
Multi's- 32
punches- jack
enjoyment- jack

MVGT jack

2-0
uppin

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Flow-jack
Mulities-32 keep practicing your improvement
Punches-32
Enjoyment-jack
Wordplay-jack

MVGT-Jack

I would like to see you two go at it agian with a different topic.

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I don't need to vote but JACK got this..Jack..had great wordplay made the disses almost feel personal and both had some decent research punches but Jack came a little harder...mad respect for neilz verse too though...Neilz had me with his but then I read Jack's and it came off harder...

Thx 4 votin' Good battle Nielz. I enjoyed the topic

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