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Check won too

-- Fri Apr 22, 2011 1:54 pm --

Omni inmO shit than a plunger. I Flip ya name and trash ya ass like a dumpster
you'll never beat me, i'm deadly. Your rhymes are creepy like Eddy Munster

Youre nothin to me. your huffin n puffin ta breath. strugglin to see your insignificance
So read this discussion as my brains spontaneous combustion claims omnipotence

You're a small matter and i'm the Alpha and Omega
I'm about to encompass and delete all yer data

Dissect all your small parts and make sense of your inner workings
This word king is hell bent with fury for you sinning Earthlings

Mack's like Mercury gonna bring the heat like Mississippi burning.
And you'll be a remnant of destruction just like Saturns rings.


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http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/audib ... 21812.html

It's been a while...
let's see if I still got it...


^^^Act tough and you’ll get smacked up, this is easily a wrap bud
My verse will turn ya to a coward, see, cuz you couldn't 'punch it powerfully' if you were a 'mack truck'

haha...

Old as fuck and looking like a rat and shit; Mack’s heat? Only if I’m packing it
Catch me cracking him; I let a few off to put this 'turd in a box' like I’m 'wrapping shit'

and yeah...

You should be very scared...cuz like God, Omni’s everywhere, I’m here to be brutal; slay dude
Tell your fam to pray too, murdering you with rhymes and these aint 'bible' times, so even 'Jesus couldn’t save you'

meh...

I'll snatch ya life like a 'parasite', I know I'm 'bugging/bug in' you
I see your wins only come in twos, another loss? I wouldn't doubt it dude...cuz the way M L's is nothing new

and last but not least...

my punches hit so hard I'll bash yo brains, understand that I don’t battle lames
I’m spitting fire so my words handle flames,...i just burned him up and put 'M in a box' like 'scrabble games'

- peep his profile for the rat and shit line...everything else should be easy. if you dont get shit then dont vote simple and plain, eh?

-- Fri Apr 22, 2011 4:59 pm --

Oh, and Lazarus got resurrected by Jesus Christ...

omnie..decent verse..m in scrabble box is a played concept though...nice multies but punches didn't hit too hard for me..wordplay was ok but basic...
no disrespect though..did like some of the concepts...Mack first line was hot..second line was solid..3rd line was a great idea but missed with the punch part..last two lines..eeehh..both verses lacked significant personal attacks although mack's started better for me..omnie executed the closer better..punchlines were a tie for me...omnie got the multies for me...omnie had three lines stand out for me but mack had two and a half full bars i enjoyed so....this was close cause the multies and flow were nice from omnie but by a thin hair i have to go with omnie although mack was reeeaaally close on this one..wish i could go overtime,LOL,but can't...A COUPLE MORE DIRECT LINES FROM OMNIE

MVGT: OMNIE

@Mack Started off good and gradually got a little weaker. You should try reading your rhyme before you submit it to make sure it is correct. Your punches were more joke like and not personal at Omnie really...wasn't too funny at the end just looked like you ran outta material.

@Omnie I think your rhyme was fairly decent. Stayed about the same level all the way through good concepts and shit some played out, but hey it's been awhile right? Overall you did spit the better bars.

MVGT: OMNIE

MVGT Omnie


I already broke down a vote for this and it got erased... Not doing it again. He just had better attack schemes and wording.