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Shit Aint That Good Just Gettin It Off My Chest...

You Talk Bout Drainin Veins Till They Empty
But Only See Blood When Your Pen Bleeds/
I Guess Im The Only One Whos Dialated
On The Public Of The Crisis That Im Chasin/
Who The Fuck Names Themselves Domino
When Kawnvikt Played Domino In A Jail Cell Many Years Agoa/
And Still Keep Going Back To The Same Round Table
Where Niggas Flows Couldnt Elevate Even If They Was Able/
I Hate Blasphemous Folks Who Act Like They Know
But Really Have No Clue Which Way The Directions Show/
Your Flow Is Weak Your Bars Have Been Played On CD-Roms
And Your Pre-Writtens Are Posted On Dictionary Dot Com
I Hate People Who Think They Vocabs The Best
Just Because They Can Cut And Copy And Paste They Breathe
Like They Know Whats Ill And Could View It From Any Angle
Your The Bitch I Wanna Strangle So Domino Thank You

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*Pats u On The Head*...Dude, u Suck Rofl, Why u Gettin involved in My Beef Pop-n-Fresh? im Sure u Get involved in Every1's 'Beef' u Fat Bastard Lmao

LMAO Coming from a kid who dont even know me just knows that I used to flow with mac and I told you if you read it was just shit off my head right quick and I know it sucked yo.... But felt like posting something You and mac got your own beef I just was thinkin bout how you act like Lawgix man. So enjoy and keep talkin shit and if you got a problem take it to the Battle Groundz

1st Of All it's Me n Mac's Beef Cuz He Holds Net Grudges Waaayyyy 2 Long. And i See Than Sum1 i Dont Even Kno is Dissin Me? i Aint Beefin With Lawgix, Diverse Or u But u Had 2 Get Yourself involved in Mac's Problems u Dick Ridin Faggit Lmfao

Illiteracy Must Be Bad This Time Of Year. An Stop Bein A Hypocrite, Talkin About I Hold Grudges..DUKE lol You Came At Me On This Site, I Told You I Aint Beefin With You, But You're Like A Whore, Once On Somebodies Dick You Aint Wanna Get Off. I Wasn't Joining Here To Battle Or Anything Like That, I Was Joining Here Cuz LawGix Fat Ass Liked Sayin My Name In Battles An Shit When I wasn't Even On This Site! lol Wich Is Sad, People Put My Name In Battles When I'm Not The Person They Battlin.. I've Even Told Tyler Numerous Times I Squashed Shit With You. Now Eat A Dick An Add Me Back To Messenger For I Gotta Raise My Pimp Hand Way Strong..

If You Decide To Squash Shit An Add Me My Email Aint Mac_out It's [email protected] Now. I Changed Emails..

LoL Mac i Was Not Beefing With u Until That Convo a Couple Weeks Ago Where u Were Makin Smart Remarks at Me, So i Asked u 2 Battle Here. if u Wnna Squash it Then Fine By Me im Not Gnna Waste Time Net Beefin LoL

Lol @ A Couple Weeks Ago, An You Said I Hold A Grudge? I Dont Even Remember What Was Said!..haha But Word It's Squashed...

this was decent, most of the punchlines are simple work on being more creative with them, your rhyme scheme needs some work too